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Re: I'm Villainous

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jul 4th, '10, 05:00

sun line was dope shit :worship:
Solace wrote:Oh stop your making me blush :blinking:

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Re: I'm Villainous

Postby Solace » Jul 4th, '10, 05:02

I'm villainous, you see me riding the beat like my Reliant,
So hot that if your hair caught fire you wouldn't see the Thrill in it.

Thrill in it... Villainous rhyme..Why did you end the line with Reliant?

Other than that this was pretty nice Geno.
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Re: I'm Villainous

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jul 4th, '10, 05:25

Geno wrote:
Solace wrote:I'm villainous, you see me riding the beat like my Reliant,
So hot that if your hair caught fire you wouldn't see the Thrill in it.

Thrill in it... Villainous rhyme..Why did you end the line with Reliant?

Other than that this was pretty nice Geno.

The way I pronounce Reliant in this particular case sounds like villainous and thrill in it. You know, enunciating words differently to make them rhyme.

I could probably think of something better to go there though.

still sick :y:
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Re: I'm Villainous

Postby Solace » Jul 4th, '10, 05:30

Geno wrote:
Solace wrote:I'm villainous, you see me riding the beat like my Reliant,
So hot that if your hair caught fire you wouldn't see the Thrill in it.

Thrill in it... Villainous rhyme..Why did you end the line with Reliant?

Other than that this was pretty nice Geno.

The way I pronounce Reliant in this particular case sounds like villainous and thrill in it. You know, enunciating words differently to make them rhyme.

I could probably think of something better to go there though.

You're stretching it wayyy too far. I can get it though, but still. :whistle:
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Re: I'm Villainous

Postby Solace » Jul 4th, '10, 05:36

Much better :flower:
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Re: I'm Villainous

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jul 4th, '10, 05:41

Geno wrote:Thank you. :flower:
it is :y: feed on my shit, (relentless) someone said its better then what i usually drop :whistle: :whistle:
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Re: I'm Villainous

Postby 77o77 » Jul 7th, '10, 05:53

Solace wrote:Much better :flower:
I love bein hated, it's great
It let's me know that I made it
I wouldn't have it no other way

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