Geno - Legendary (16 bars)

[Just Silver]

I liked it for the most part but the Jay and Em line was a little too cocky lol

good shit 8/10

[mcZu]

Nice, not bad. You structured your verse pretty well, had a good rhyme scheme, some dope multies and managed to convey the overall ''I'm better than you'' message. Try to write about something else besides bragging, a brag verse once in a while is good to train your lyrical skills, but writing heartfelt, deep, poetic, real verses is where it's at. Keep writing, you have talent. It's a good verse.