LT ft. Alieus SliK & Innovation - Lyrical Massacre II

[Maybe]

I'll edit my feedback here when I get home.

[SliK]

Ego killed it.

[SliK]

Thanks, though I do regret not spending more time on my verse after reading everyone else's haha

[JamaicanPattlez]

Daaaaaaaaaaamn! I wanna get in on these collabs.

[Man1x]

Woah, all in all, great track. I, however, wasn't feeling the hook. Maybe it sounds better of paper idk, but hopefully this gets record on day. Ego did the best IMO however.

[Man1x]

Oh that makes more sense, could you feedback my "Take a Breath"?
http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=122518

[JamaicanPattlez]

:smoking:

Any criticism or anything?

Nah, I really liked it, especially the last verse. Dope!

[J.R.]

I'm glad.

[Matt Holck]

Nutz could be tighter
the 3 phrases lines work setup/situation/resolution
and the vocabulary is rich
I think they could uses a stitch or two more of inner rhyme and rhythm

[J.R.]

Sorry, but your post is confusing me. ^

Are you just referring to the 1st verse, or everyone?

Yeah,

My vocab was straight up random dictionary shit. and menzo liked the cirumvent line, so im happy

[Man1x]

@ Cream, I thought your two firs lines were amazing, the rest was good but IMO they didn't hold there own to the first bar. And I know many people don't give feedback here but just breeze through so feedback would be appreciated : http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=122680

Edit: oh I your lyristist's depression/ satirical impression was pretty tight as well

[Tash8]

ego, verse is fire, vocab is well done and the words roll together well. especially at the end. good shit

[EyeSpick]

How about you guys get some mics and be big boys

[Master Chief]

^ How is this dude not banned yet? Are the mods THAT stupid?

On another note, this was dope (duh). Everyone's rhyming was on point, that includes B and C.R.E.A.M. Innovation's part was real short, it was enjoyable though. Ego had that advanced vocab and the syllables game was tight. Good for what it was.

[J.R.]

^ How is this dude not banned yet? Are the mods THAT stupid?

On another note, this was dope (duh). Everyone's rhyming was on point, that includes B and C.R.E.A.M. Innovation's part was real short, it was enjoyable though. Ego had that advanced vocab and the syllables game was tight. Good for what it was.

He didn't do anything worthy of being banned, that I know of. Thanks for the feed.

Double account for sure Geno.



I'll Circumvent you ,and pestle you into the ground
Hmm, I'm discontent, but who's unsuccessful now?

Read it Eyespick. -.-