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Geno - Witness Nostradamus

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Re: Geno - Witness Nostradamus

Postby Mr.DGAF » Jun 4th, '12, 06:29

Let the games begin haha. :whistle:

For the piece itself, very nice. I'll take it as a friendly jab, but we'll respond. :smoking: But the rhyming and flow is quite nice here. You're always at your best on these types of verses, just rhyming. No hate, kinda expected a response, and you've definitely got some nice subliminals in there. Even in the title I see haha.
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How many truths you can hide in flows

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Re: Geno - Witness Nostradamus

Postby Eedee » Jun 4th, '12, 07:22

^ DGAF nails it. I'm not gonna beat around the bush - incredible flow and rhymes here, Geno. I think I got some of the references :sweating:

Anyway, I really think these types of pieces bring out the best in people. Good fun! :y:
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Re: Geno - Witness Nostradamus

Postby ShAdYTiLIDie » Jun 5th, '12, 01:00

Wow man, great piece! hahah I came because I just saw the response they wrote lol. Really good I read it to the beat and everything was just on point. One of the best pieces I have seen from you so far keep it up rhyming is superb.
Nice dude !! Hopefully this diss war will go on lol
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