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Psycho (Emulation Games Day 1)

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Psycho (Emulation Games Day 1)

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Oct 3rd, '12, 18:58

Here's my version of Inspectah Deck's verse in Protect Ya Neck

I'm sharp on the mic like an edge of a razor
Optical maser, on point like a laser
Terrorizing members like trolls on TR man
Hustling through your town like your neighborhood dopeman
So uhh, peep the shit I'm ripping
While I start tripping off the this shit I'm drinking
An alcoholic, a few more drinks now you're in danger
In the dark is where I make my mark
A psycho, Just like Michael(Myers)
Like no, other kill you and your mother
Inspectah Deck? Nah, It's PAINKILLƎR with a chromed out tech
And ready to spray at anybody who don't like my shit

*Original*
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oAAtoyHCxUc

I smoke on the mic like smokin' Joe Frazier
The hell-raiser, raising hell with the flavor
Terrorize the jam like troops in Pakistan
Swinging through your town like your neighborhood Spiderman
So uhh, tick tock keep ticking
While I get you flipping off the shit I'm kicking
The Lone Ranger, code red: danger!
Deep in the dark with the art to rip the charts apart
The vandal, too hot to handle
You battle, you're saying goodbye like Tevin Campbell
Roughneck, Inspectah Deck's on the set
The rebel, I make more noise than heavy metal

Hope yall like this shit :wave:
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Re: Psycho (Emulation Games Day 1)

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Oct 3rd, '12, 19:35

Hmm thanks for the feedback Geno I appreciate it, It's my first time writing since like 7th grade and that was like 6 years ago I think. Well thanks anyway
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Re: Psycho (Emulation Games Day 1)

Postby Eedee » Oct 3rd, '12, 20:07

I'm sharp on the mic like an edge of a razor
Optical maser, on point like a laser


Had great flow for me. I loved this part.

Haven't written in 6 years? Impressive, to be honest. Just keep at it, hopefully these Games will help.
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Re: Psycho (Emulation Games Day 1)

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Oct 4th, '12, 18:13

Eedee wrote:I'm sharp on the mic like an edge of a razor
Optical maser, on point like a laser


Had great flow for me. I loved this part.

Haven't written in 6 years? Impressive, to be honest. Just keep at it, hopefully these Games will help.

Thanks Eedee means a lot :y:
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