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Re: Bigray feat Bishop - Cypher (freestyle)

Postby ShadysDisciple » Nov 9th, '12, 03:33

Pretty good job! One suggestion, make your rhymes a bit less simple, try to rhyme more than 1 syllable if you can!
The flow was good on this but it would've been even doper with a beat, good drop all in all though!
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Re: Bigray feat Bishop - Cypher (freestyle)

Postby Spyder » Nov 13th, '12, 04:36

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Re: Bigray feat Bishop - Cypher (freestyle)

Postby Spyder » Nov 13th, '12, 16:31

lol he wont respond doe'
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