J.R./Atone VS SliK/CrashBand [R1-TTT]

[Eedee]

SliK CrashBand

SliK and CrashBand, the tits and ass fans/
...We in this bitch, and it's ya last chance/
To skip the last dance... and leave this club/
Bitch please give up or get this backhand/
Ain't thick as trashcans, or big as black man's/
But we'll make it up with flips and handstands/
We're fit for grandstands…. it's how we do/
We soooo fly…like Howard Hughes/
….This coward's shoes couldn't fit my feet/
So I'll stick my meat in his bitch and skeet/
...It's my treat and she never deserved it/
Especially cos he went back for seconds and thirds and/
I need new grammar - a phrase better to word it/
How can I say she's "way lesser than perfect"/
She sucked for five minutes and she definitely hurt it/
He said he found bruises… "I needa check if its workin"!/
Man the sex isn’t worth it… you should-just-forget/
But I'm extra deserving of some good fucking head/
Let it go, you know we're just massive dreamers/
Cos in real life… girls just can't stand to see us/
Okay, let's get out of here.....Crash, where you at?/
You already know I've got no gas in the tank/
.....Or cash in the bank....I spent it all on us/
You shout tonight and get us on the bus/

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Atone
J.R.

like a Bulldozer we leave ya flattened, demolished,
You over, beating you outta this tourney, I call it,
Bollocks? Fuck with us is like a kid messin with alcoholics,
And I won't settle for a draw bitch, I'm ready and I'm polished,
Flawless, the type to leave emcee's abolished
we over-haul this, takin over like columbus
snatch up your spot, you kids are done with
we takin off from zero to a hundred
heros of the light, leave you thundered,
steer you right outta this contest, wondered.
How did I perform wonders like its no shit? Im quick,
Atone.. we drew slik, make like spyder, abort this bitch,
man screw this shit, crashband don't know what contortion is.
this tadpole bitch writing paragraphs, and ego drew him? Fair or bad?
ahh, halftongue is way past half done, spectatating fun? hey yo you mad?
Creative took the jabs, we made it, you been had
you faded, you been stabbed, we got it, throw it in the bag
we came to bury you, we aint scared of you,
it's done, over, you fairies thru,
I know I'm scary, "boo", face it, bare the truth,
man, you planted in denial, and we're the roots.
You grow, we run wild, no chance for a muse,
you know, this is the tour de france, lance i think you lose.


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ROUND 1 VOTING SHEET: Back'N'Forth
[5] Chemistry (How well did they work together. Important for this round)
[3] Rhyming/Multis
[2] Complexity (How complex were the thoughts/rhyme schemes?)
[1] Flow
[1] Vocabulary (Word choice and lexicon)
[1] Structure (How presentable and easy to read was the verse?)
[1]* WOW! Factor (A particular phrase or rhyme that stood out)
* This point can be added at judge's discretion, but is not mandatory.

Note: By writing to a beat, flow can be better achieved and may help the judges vote for the Flow point.

[PAINKILLƎR]

Cranin'

[Sam.]

I think JR and Atone's was better

Indeed.

Slik/CB verse lacked the breath of fresh air.

[Ka0t1c]

atone and j.r.

atone's simplicity with some solid rhymes
plus jr's punches made this a clear winner

[Eedee]

I'm not a judge but SliK/CrashBand won clearly. Chemistry/Multis/Complexity/Structure points all go to them. That's enough to win.

[J.R.]

Pretty even match, nice slik and crash. Best of luck when the judges come guys, havin fun minus the whole 23 dispute

[Sam.]

Sadly enough.

[Just Silver]

I'm not a judge but SliK/CrashBand won clearly. Chemistry/Multis/Complexity/Structure points all go to them. That's enough to win.

ya Crashband is pretty skilled

[Spyder]

id side with the slikband

just my opinion

[Halftongue Dre]

Not impressed with any of them which is why I want a loser bracket started so I can get my shine on with a new partner who will communicate with me and take this shit seriously. Oh well I can't decide which one was better, they both sucked.

[Blu]

I feel like nothing outstanding was said from either duo, but I did like J.R.'s and Atone's verses a little better. Slik's "black man's" line seemed a little awkward and out of place.

[J.R.]

Everyone is split and I haven't seen a single judge in here yet. Lmao.

[SliK]

I feel like nothing outstanding was said from either duo, but I did like J.R.'s and Atone's verses a little better. Slik's "black man's" line seemed a little awkward and out of place.

Mine's the bold stuff..

[Blu]

My fault. The line was so close to your last line that it looked bolded. I meant CrashBand's "big as black man's" line was awkward.

[SliK]

I think its fine tbh, but to each their own