Solace wrote:A side splitter who rhymes sicker than line spitters,
I'm bitter, my eyes wither, colder than my winter,
Couldn't help but recall these old lines of mine when I started reading this. Dude, you've improved a lot. I haven't checked this section in ages but if I can faintly recall reading older work of yours, this is a massive improvement and that's awesome. Favourite couplet:"Loser just stop, you’re stupid you just ruined your spot
You’re the bitch of YouTube and all the views that you cop"
Smooth assonance and rhyming. The ending also stood out for me, it's good to read something that ends strong.
"Slow it down with a zan and a perk
Find me a chick without a man, I’ll put my hand up her skirt
So crazy I’ll get head up in the Vatican church
I guess I’m still fucked cuz I haven’t matured"
Someone explain the Ric Flair line to me though, I never followed wrestling or its personalities
