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Mu'fuckaz Is Weak

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Mu'fuckaz Is Weak

Postby Doctor Skittlez » Feb 24th, '10, 09:05

My Ruckus Is Heat, Mu'fuckaz Is Weak,
I Buck Ya Like Heats, You Be Struck Like A Beat...

Every Mu'fucka Tryna Battle Me Get Slain In A Second,
My Brain Is A Wreckin' Ball That'll Shame Ya To Mess Wit'
Somebody So Skilled, This Doctor Perform Surgery On Ya,
Urgin' These Wanna Be's That They Ain't Burstin' Wit' Bombs, Ya
Can't Test Me, Don't Get Testy, I'ma Wreck Ya, Damn,
"Doc Can Really Hit Hard!", No Shit, I'm Reppin' Rap-
Dogs, I Rap Hard, When I Clap Ya'll Wit' My Rhymes, Ya'll Blackballed,
Now Step Back, Ya'll, Cuz You Mu'fuckaz Can't Rap Raw!

My Ruckus Is Heat, Mu'fuckaz Is Weak,
I Buck Ya Like Heats, You Be Struck Like A Beat...

Who The Fuck Wanna Step To The Doctor, Get Killed?
I'm Awfully Ill, Buck Spits So Hot, Have Ya'll Drop N' Be Filled
Wit' This Type Of Feelin' Gon' Make Ya'll Reel Wit' Pain,
Feel The Shame, Cuz The Shit I Spit Will Heal Ya Brains,
I'm On Some Jesus Type Shit, My Hype Spits On The Mic Just
Won't Let Ya Digest, I Am The Highest, No Lie, It's Bright Shit,
Stop Wastin' Ya Time Wit' Wack Rhymes, You Lack Lines
That Hit Fully, Can't Rhyme, You Mu'fuckaz Are Past Prime!

My Ruckus Is Heat, Mu'fuckaz Is Weak,
I Buck Ya Like Heats, You Be Struck Like A Beat...
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Re: Mu'fuckaz Is Weak

Postby Fa-Q » Feb 24th, '10, 14:10

Well, first off welcome to the site...I have to ask though...why do you capitalize every beginning letter on each word? Then as far as your lyrics...not bad but alotta people do the gangsta shit on here; and on TR to be considered one of the best you have to find your niche...you know. But it wasn't bad you need to dabble in some more multis as well but you'll be good...welcome to the site Skittles
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Re: Mu'fuckaz Is Weak

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 24th, '10, 14:33

Yeah man glad to see another rapper on the site :y: I dig it, like Fa-Q said you just gotta find your thing and write that heat :b:
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Mu'fuckaz Is Weak

Postby Doctor Skittlez » Feb 24th, '10, 22:38

I Got My Thing, Fam... I'm Versetile. I Can Do Some Poetic Type Shiet, Some Hardcore Rhymes Like These (They Wasn't Gangsta, Man, They Was Hardcore. In Order To Be Gangsta, I'd Have To Talk About Poppin' Gats N' Fuckin' Hoes), Anythin', Really.

But, Yo, Thanks For The Feed. Good Looks. N' I Capitalize Every Letter Cuz It Seems To Be Somin' None A Ya'll Do, So As To Be Different.
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Re: Mu'fuckaz Is Weak

Postby gutawafang » Feb 25th, '10, 02:52

You remind me of somebody else from this site who capitalize the first letter of every word... :unsure:

But well, the punches is good here man. Multis too. :y:
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