Back with mine

[Just Silver]

Add an addiction, take a stab at addition,
ever had a madness ravaging, with partial linguistics,
back to math with it, come subtract physics,
combine contract, twisted paragraphs ,listed
so here i was, kept going you missed it
you should have listened, how im fixed to this piston
im a machine misted with oil ,straight lifted
face don't have lips, and got some condition,
hospitalized for a possible 9 lines,
stitching with twine and staples
will i be able to go back and rock
without the cable
learned from mistakes but i have only made them
i earn and retake tests of life they keep changing
from where i had an F and couldn't give one
from where i had an A hip hop hooray i need a big one
so id just get done, and id want to party it up
bacardi in cups,is surely enough, for these burliest stunts
so toss me another
this way on the bar table, my brother
scars taken from others
during times that werent so grand
when i was murked and damned
to my own hearse and then,
i would rise from a once slept slumber
and i'd cook guys from all direct comers
see i would i meet them back at the vill
with a old halloween mask for thrills
cheap and plastic but i creep up back with
and unleash a drastic, spastic,action
with a switch action, blade compact in,
the back since, the spine fall ,and crack bitch
so you can straight whine you half wits
but if you take mine best you believe I act sick

[classthe_king]

Rhymes were good, pretty entertaning. Flow was bad though, work on that.

[Just Silver]

Rhymes were good, pretty entertaning. Flow was bad though, work on that.

didn't seem too out of place for any way

but alright i can see how it was sort of it was start to finish no save drafts 10 min

[classthe_king]

Rhymes were good, pretty entertaning. Flow was bad though, work on that.

didn't seem too out of place for any way

but alright i can see how it was sort of it was start to finish no save drafts 10 min

Yeah, doing something that long in 10 minutes won't be perfect. But thats dope that that took you 10 minutes. In 10 minutes I would get like 6 lines

[Just Silver]

Rhymes were good, pretty entertaning. Flow was bad though, work on that.

didn't seem too out of place for any way

but alright i can see how it was sort of it was start to finish no save drafts 10 min

Yeah, doing something that long in 10 minutes won't be perfect. But thats dope that that took you 10 minutes. In 10 minutes I would get like 6 lines

i get you man good looks on feedin

[Yah-hah]

Yeah your flow is different but you always come with the multies lol. Good shit homie

[Just Silver]

im a stop and flow type of writer don't know if thats popular or not but i like it

[gutawafang]

Your avatar is distracting.

The style is unique here and I think the mutlis are all good.

Worth the read homie.

[Just Silver]

Your avatar is distracting.

The style is unique here and I think the mutlis are all good.

Worth the read homie.

lol yeah gotta love Bubbles

thanks for feed