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Nooses and Outlets

Postby Yah-hah » Mar 22nd, '10, 14:31

She says the charge is off, the spark is gone,
That it stays cold no matter how long the car is on,
My touch used to take her to the outer reaches of space and far beyond,
Used to stay on top of this mountain I keep counting but now I’m hardly on,
I used to be able to knock her rings off but now the last thing I can do is get one on,
Not my lack of courage but funds to be able to fit one on, fit one wrong,
So I stay up just to rip one song on the paper I save sure but still it was given wrong,
Feeling like I’m pissed upon even this shit song written on paper I’ve haven’t even written on,
Till I get kissed upon but I can’t remember the last time I haven’t been kissed this long,
Something like since Christmas long can’t stop from feeling like this shit’s wrong,
Where is this song, I think I lost it in the storm,
I stranded outside screamin, “WHERE IS THE WARMTH?”
Stressin me, caressin me, blessed be, Fuck it WHERE IS THE LORD,
I just want the spark back cause my heart’s scratched and charred black where is the chord,
Wouldn’t even know where to put it around my neck or the outlet,
Around this stress so boudnless I can’t help but feel so surrounded,
Dumbfounded with no sleep the discreet sheep keep me from countin,
Full moon I’m howlin, how bout it? Us wolves we mate for life,
Pretty smile with the braids is nice, Tattoo says “Native Pride”,
All the feelings stay inside wait and hide never playin nice,
Enraged my wife holds her mouth from sayin it twice,
Those pills yeah take em twice save my life or take it my wife,
Like a hunter waitin to strike cutting my heart with a serraded knife,
So I found the chord but no outlet so how bout it?
Now it’s wrapped round my neck standing in the chair dare me to jump out it?
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Nooses and Outlets

Postby Fa-Q » Mar 22nd, '10, 14:47

Fuck, jus where you been lol and damn this is a crazy good concept...the idea that either you get back up or you kill yourself personifying the same object...shit I love this shit Jus...like to see the full version of it :D
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Re: Nooses and Outlets

Postby Yah-hah » Mar 22nd, '10, 14:52

Fa-Q wrote:Fuck, jus where you been lol and damn this is a crazy good concept...the idea that either you get back up or you kill yourself personifying the same object...shit I love this shit Jus...like to see the full version of it :D


Yeah just wat I wrote last night. Me and T got to talking and she's sayin that spark is gonna gone ya know. Just had me thinkin. Thanks bro
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Nooses and Outlets

Postby mcZu » Mar 23rd, '10, 00:24

Nice way of ending it.
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
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Re: Nooses and Outlets

Postby Arabian Shady » Mar 23rd, '10, 12:32

This is as good description and stroy tellin on Tr gets.
One of the best ive seen on tr in a couple weeks :y:
Keep 'em comin bro
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So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: Nooses and Outlets

Postby Drama Setter » Mar 23rd, '10, 12:51

You did it well :y:
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Re: Nooses and Outlets

Postby Yah-hah » Mar 25th, '10, 17:52

Thanks to the homies lol its good to see yall again after all these long years lmao
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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