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Coleon - 16 Bar Stories

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Re: Coleon - 16 Bar Stories

Postby classthe_king » Mar 29th, '10, 03:06

This was really good story telling. Is this what you wanted that beat for?
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Coleon - 16 Bar Stories

Postby classthe_king » Mar 29th, '10, 03:08

You can't trick me :shifty: You mentioned hero at the end of both verses
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