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16 bars for my girlfriend.

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16 bars for my girlfriend.

Postby hype » Apr 1st, '10, 03:28

thinking of turning this into a full song and showing it to her.

i never expected to feel like this when she arrived (hello, hi)
sometimes it only takes a split second to realise.
that me and her talk for hours; i just love to see her eyes
moments like this make me so grateful to be alive. (yeah)
she and i connect like we're connecting the dots
i love everything about her, i'm accepting the lot.
i can trust her completely, i'm not expecting a shock,
or a turn of events in the future .. because she loves me.
i thank the lord every time that i .. look above me
yeah; she is so lovely; her smile is mesmerising
i stare at her while she lays on my bed revising
it's best rewinding back in my mind to our first time
it was more exciting than reciting my first rhyme
i see couples everyday getting savaged apart
but in worse times me and her still manage to laugh
i believe that she will never go and damage my heart (i love you)
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