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X'ed Up- Get It On

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X'ed Up- Get It On

Postby X'ed Up » Apr 1st, '10, 02:48

My club banger inspired by 2Pac's Toss It Up. Altough, it doesn't have the same flow so don't try to rap it to the Toss It Up Instrumental.

Beat:http://www.shadowville.com/1156/genres/club-beats/blow-it-up

Lord, please help me, this very moment,
Feeling possessed by a girl like an omen,
Ludacris is jealous of my faisty bad chick,
On stage performing this sexy mad trick,
Life is a celebration on every single day,
Now, get it on and come mingle with me,
Bring back the joy around my hometown,
While everyone partys lets be alone now,
All Eyez On Me, and homey I'm loving it,
I can tell me and you share a covenant,
Pop an X pill and just gimme a few hugs,
It don't matter the way you view thugs,
I got no girl, you got no guy so dance,
Please, stop pulling down my low pants,
Whatever your holding just Toss It Up,
Beer, wine, zig zags, I know y'all drunk,

[Chorus/Hook]
Come on people get the fuck up,
Lemme see you, lemme see you get it on,
Get dirty don't be stuck up,
Lemme see you, lemme see you get it on,
On whatever can get you on,
Lemme see you, lemme see you get it on,
Beer pong, a bong, am I wrong?
I just wanna see you get it the fuck on,

Forget life, I live with not a single care,
Not even one wait a second, bingo there,
I finally spot a chick for once not a bitch,
A luscious babe making my mind glitch,
But I ain't here to love I'm here to party,
A teen rebel drunk on beer and bacardi,
Now, please put that gun and rifle away,
Here, just put inside this recycle tray,
As the club gets silent up comes a bark,
That's Powerful enough to rip suns apart,
Let's tear this bitch into small particles,
Bark, and bark until your heart, it goes,
Boom, boom, boom each little millisec,
Is X a player thug, man what a silly bet,
Enough, with all this pointless babbling,
Get set for some motherfucking battling,

[Chorus/Hook]
Come on people get the fuck up,
Lemme see you, lemme see you get it on,
Get dirty don't be stuck up,
Lemme see you, lemme see you get it on,
On whatever can get you on,
Lemme see you, lemme see you get it on,
Beer pong, a bong, am I wrong?
I just wanna see you get it the fuck on,

Let's blow this bitch all the way to space,
The place Lil Wayne hides out to blaze,
And where Birdman flys without wings,
But we ain't about to get in these things,
Just remember this day, call it X-Day,
No, Dre Day or Pac Day, you best pay,
Attention when X is to finally speak,
Cause that fucker's reached his peak,

[Chorus/Hook]
Come on people get the fuck up,
Lemme see you, lemme see you get it on,
Get dirty don't be stuck up,
Lemme see you, lemme see you get it on,
On whatever can get you on,
Lemme see you, lemme see you get it on,
Beer pong, a bong, am I wrong?
I just wanna see you get it the fuck on,
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Re: X'ed Up- Get It On

Postby X'ed Up » Apr 1st, '10, 19:55

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Re: X'ed Up- Get It On

Postby dR3 » Apr 2nd, '10, 14:33

Really good structure and rhymes, but I don't like the content (club song). :coffee:
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Re: X'ed Up- Get It On

Postby X'ed Up » Apr 2nd, '10, 21:02

dR.dR3 wrote:Really good structure and rhymes, but I don't like the content (club song). :coffee:

Yeah, I knew club banger's are frowned upon on CW. But, after listening to Toss It Up i had to, sorry :sweating:

Anyways thanks D.R.E :flower:
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Re: X'ed Up- Get It On

Postby Fa-Q » Apr 2nd, '10, 21:18

X, Comeon man no club bangers...CW spews out that luke water
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Re: X'ed Up- Get It On

Postby X'ed Up » Apr 2nd, '10, 22:22

Fa-Q wrote:X, Comeon man no club bangers...CW spews out that luke water

I blame Toss It Up :'(

Why is it frowned upon though? :unsure:
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Re: X'ed Up- Get It On

Postby Fa-Q » Apr 2nd, '10, 22:25

X'ed Up wrote:
Fa-Q wrote:X, Comeon man no club bangers...CW spews out that luke water

I blame Toss It Up :'(

Why is it frowned upon though? :unsure:

because its what destroyed hiphop for a brief period
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Re: X'ed Up- Get It On

Postby X'ed Up » Apr 2nd, '10, 22:26

Fa-Q wrote:
X'ed Up wrote:
Fa-Q wrote:X, Comeon man no club bangers...CW spews out that luke water

I blame Toss It Up :'(

Why is it frowned upon though? :unsure:

because its what destroyed hiphop for a brief period

Agreed. But I like trying different shit all the time. So i guess, stay away from club bangers? :unsure:
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