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No Xceptions (Diss) .. With Spyder

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No Xceptions (Diss) .. With Spyder

Postby J Roc » Apr 2nd, '10, 14:25

J ROC :
Time For a Couple Disses, If He Get's "X'd Up" Without a Drug Prescription?
Then I'mma Collect-Dough Everything that "X-Owe" Like Hugs & kisses (Xoxo)
I'mma Shoot N Pop Eagles, Ur Tha Money Tree Aka Tha 'Root' Of All Evil
Ur Getting-Disgraced , Like Spit-In-The-Face'd For Tryina Be 'Coool' Like Carlito
A kid Hitting a Joint, Vs a Queer With an Empty Ass Tryina Fill in the void
in Sex-Ed,-Macking-Dick Then They "Fed-X-Packages" Like Delivery Boy's !!!! (Whaaat???) O_o
Ur Bitch Likes Cock-In-Her-Bed Everynight im "Callin-For-Head" Without Flipping a Coin
On The Net Doing BitchMade Stuff , Even Pillhead's Think ur Nickname Suck's
x'd up wrote:I got no girl,

Now u got 99 problems , but atleast a bitch aint one
Ur Raps 'Lame' Like a Stamp Collector, Paper? Get Some New "Sheets" Like a Mattress Wetter
Cuz See-His-Text-Sucks Only People 'Feeling-X-Up' Are Couples Getting Back Together
If the Beef Is On You Can Eat a Cock Or Get 'Nailed' Like a Jesus Cross
Fuck a Fucking-Hose I'mma Leave "UP-in-Smoke" Like Cheech n Chong
Who Would Idolise You? U Got Mad-Spits? That's-"Rich" Without biting Vitamin Food
Is Dawgggy-Kidding-Me? Im Just Testing his "Response-Ability" Like Aspiring Youth's (Responsibility)

LiiiiighttttAssssssFuckkkk!!!!

SPYDER :
I got this place Locked Down, can you stand ya Guard
You try to ‘Be Em, X’ but cant ‘Handle Bars’.
We damage and scar, you rhymes been said already
Gettin Nervous I feel ‘X-Tension’ like my Head Is Heavy.
Your Punches Swing and Miss while I Strike Ya Chest
So ‘X Don’t Connect’, like he on some ‘Y-Or-Less’
But I digress, don’t Cross Me you flawless it seems?
You a ‘Bottom Bunk Rapper’ aint even on ‘Top In Ya Dreams’
Roc Ya Ta Sleep Unconscious when you Met The Mattress
Im more than ‘X-Specs’ like some ‘Expensive Glasses’
Fuck these new dudes heated your troops depleted
Hype Man’ll ‘Die In This Bar’ no Proof is needed,
So when the Hype died down you a common cancer
So now we get ‘X To Pop Up’… ‘Wrong Answer’
These rhymes likes Knives to slice wanna See Swords
Shit is Beneath Me, I put ‘X On Bottom’ like Keyboards.
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Re: No Xceptions (Diss) .. With Spyder

Postby embm » Apr 2nd, '10, 15:32

vry nice :y: ;)
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Re: No Xceptions (Diss) .. With Spyder

Postby classthe_king » Apr 2nd, '10, 15:49

I like X'd up so I don't know why you dissed him but this was still awesome. Spyder, I already told you what I think of yours. J Roc yours was sick too :worship: Much better then you're last piece
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: No Xceptions (Diss) .. With Spyder

Postby X'ed Up » Apr 2nd, '10, 21:08

.....And the battle begins :smoking:

I still don't know why me, when i barely talk to you guys.....but it's on :wave:
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Re: No Xceptions (Diss) .. With Spyder

Postby Spyder » Apr 2nd, '10, 21:39

thanks for the feed guys

thanks for the in depth cole, yea im trying to work on better set-ups.
and wtf is with me gettin close to lines smh, i dont mean to i swear :'(
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Re: No Xceptions (Diss) .. With Spyder

Postby QzA » Apr 3rd, '10, 04:27

nice shit!!!...i'm liking those bars bro!!
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Re: No Xceptions (Diss) .. With Spyder

Postby Solace » Apr 3rd, '10, 04:31

Lmao@Roccy writing Spyders verse.
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Re: No Xceptions (Diss) .. With Spyder

Postby X'ed Up » Apr 3rd, '10, 04:33

Why does everyone hate me? :'( anyways response in 5 minutes. :smoking:
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Re: No Xceptions (Diss) .. With Spyder

Postby Solace » Apr 3rd, '10, 04:34

X'ed Up wrote:Why does everyone hate me? :'(

thats what she said after i beat her face in
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Re: No Xceptions (Diss) .. With Spyder

Postby X'ed Up » Apr 3rd, '10, 04:35

Solace wrote:
X'ed Up wrote:Why does everyone hate me? :'(

thats what she said after i beat her face in

I would like to meet her :shifty:
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Re: No Xceptions (Diss) .. With Spyder

Postby Solace » Apr 3rd, '10, 04:36

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Re: No Xceptions (Diss) .. With Spyder

Postby J Roc » Apr 3rd, '10, 04:40

Thanks for peeeping & Feeding every1
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Re: No Xceptions (Diss) .. With Spyder

Postby X'ed Up » Apr 3rd, '10, 04:43

Solace wrote:Well here's her profile

memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=35424

Fuck You x2 :angry:

For calling me a girl but mostly for making me hit myself because i thought at the last second it would be an exorcist pic :angry:
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Re: No Xceptions (Diss) .. With Spyder

Postby Spyder » Apr 3rd, '10, 06:14

Solace wrote:Lmao@Roccy writing Spyders verse.


i take that as a compliment to my improving punches
thank you solace for your kind words :angry:
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