A-verse

[mcZu]

A random throwaway verse, probably gonna end up as a random written freestyle, I guess..

Dopamine, Ritalin, oedipal when I be riddling
Add a pal and I’ll be killing them
Charge forth like PayPal, I’ll be billing them
Promethazine verses, I’ll be building them
Magazines come out the middle, pin up posters
I’m no decorator, but I’ll pin up posers
Concealing them, feelings in dealing and
I’ll be adding a seal to conceal the con feelings, then
I’ll proceed to donate the proceeds
To the sicker camp, me, I rotate like athletes
Meaning I’m mean when I’m seen
‘cause I cause causes to pause when I intervene
So in a scene the scenario is miniscule
Make sure that the ratio is feasible
I’m underground like a Pharaoh tomb
Far from radio-active, aint no Chernobyl
Lean back in a chair, and school the rest
‘cause I ridicule the rest, pitiful test
The pit full with pitiful pit-bull like flesh
So I spit till I split atoms ‘cause I’m fresh, fresh, fresh

[Fa-Q]

Couldn't get the flow, what did you write this too...

Good verse though

[mcZu]

throw away verse?? damn lol mutlis are insane in this lol

how long u been writing zu? plus any tips for someone new? <<didnt intend for that to rhyme

Thanks Steven, appreciate it. I've been writing for 4 years now, started to take writing serious when I turned 16. Before that I used to write poems and stories.

Tips? Hmm. Well, first of all, do you. Don't copy anyone, you might be influenced by X emcee, but you cannot copy X's style 'cause that style isn't you. Don't try to be too complex, and don't try to be simple at the same time. Try to express what's on your mind, do not hold back because you think that it might be not what people want to read. Because the minute you censure your own opinion, you'll lose your integrity.

And, yeah, I think you already know about the technicalities in writing, so no need for pointing those out. But, don't try to over do it, especially with multies. They must come out natural, not forced.

And above all, try to write to beats. That way you'll learn how to construct a real proper flow. I always write to beats, because they give me inspiration as well. Only time I don't write to beats is when I have a concrete concept in mind, I need to work it out first.

Couldn't get the flow, what did you write this too...

Good verse though

Thanks Fa-Q. Wrote it to Biggie's Hypnotize, but I can flow it to almost every beat, aslong as the beat isn't too wild.