I Wish

[Solace]

[Verse 1]
I wish I was the best at writing, always the best at fighting,
And that every event I attended was the best, exciting,
I wish everybody liked me, everything I author bites me,
Exposes through lines so why even bother write these?
I wish I was cuter, faster and that I had a girl to care for,
Since the start of days I'm far away in this world, so therefore,
I wish that my rep didn't worsen, that I was a better person,
Now in the words I'm cursin' every single letter's burnin',
I wish people admired me, but they're stupid, oh the irony,
Burn to crisps in flames of society, every job would fire me,
I wish I was rich as hell, maybe that I was ripped as well,
Or being able to say truthfully: "Sorry I can't kiss and tell",
I wish that things were easier, and that I'd have a mic to rip,
Sometimes with pain inside the brain I'd like another life to live,
I wish I was happier, I wish that I didn't trip in sadness,
And I wish I was able to get any of these wishes granted.

[Hook]
I'm always thinking, because I could wish for centuries,
Could be the best to breath or quite the best emcee,
But for now life is dead to me, please end my dreams,
Of a single wish being granted, even if so mentally.

[Verse 2]
I wish I could earn respect and maybe could burn the rest,
And maybe just crazily could stop being a nervous wreck,
I wish I lived in a mansion, would be richest in fashion,
Would be more looked up to than all these bitches imagined,
I wish I had all the qualities that all people want to see,
And that there were no bad thoughts of people haunting me,
I wish there were things I'd bother to do, get farther than you,
Or that I had the motivation to just study harder in school,
I wish things would change, my plans would follow through,
And that the soul of everyone else was all hollow too,
I wish I was famous, to my teacher not "more than luck to do",
But the only two words I'd speak would be "fuck" and "you",
I wish my wishes didn't disperse, listen to the listener's words,
It'd be great to see a day for me not living this worse,
I wish I was happier, that my words weren't stripped to adlibs,
And I wish I was able to get any of these wishes granted.

[Hook]
I'm always thinking, because I could wish for centuries,
Could be the best to breath or quite the best emcee,
But for now life is dead to me, I write to end my dreams,
Of a single wish being granted, even if so mentally.

[J Roc]

2nd verse was iight .. the first verse was fucking fireeeee !!! ..... Shit was impresssivee , minus a few parts but it heated back up

[Solace]

Thanks bro, mad appreciated.

[Tash8]

i didn't catch a flow..

[Solace]

Is that all you really have to comment on?

[Tash8]

Is that all you really have to comment on?

lollll yes sorry...umm besides that it seemed fine..but honestly a piece without a flow is really hard to read.

[Solace]

Well I can read it with a really nice flow...But no biggie if both of us can't. Thanks for at least checking itt.

[Tash8]

i liked the concept

[Massacrous]

This had mad deep lyrics. Flow turned on and off for me until the 2nd verse. The multis were always there.

The 1st verse is definitely fucking awesome and the 2nd verse is nice. This was really dope man

[SajN]

This had mad deep lyrics. Flow turned on and off for me until the 2nd verse. The multis were always there.

The 1st verse is definitely fucking awesome and the 2nd verse is nice. This was really dope man

2sday... X'd Up... Give up.

[Solace]

Thanks Massacrous/2sDay/X'ed Up ??

As long as somebody enjoyed it.

[SajN]

I was going to feed it, but 2sday took away the attention lol.


I was going to say that it was great. I can relate to them thoughts as well, so really great

[Solace]

So, banned?

And thank you, I appreciate it a lot.

[SajN]

Yes and you're welcome.