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Of Wolf And Man

Postby Spyder » Apr 18th, '10, 21:39

-was meant for Coleon vs Spyder Topical but that fell through-

The darkness surrounds and shrouds this place I remain
aroused compounds in my brain I disgrace to this day,
I pace in a way to figure out how to contain the beast ive become
As the clouds fade the sudden increase to feast on someone,
When will dawn come, I lock the door that I inhabit, my cell
Break mirrors as the reflections image no longer mimics my health.
This is my hell, pale faced, sweat trickles down the plates of my spine
Core heats up to temperatures that I just cant take it so I,
Shred my clothes as my house a mess, a heap by the door
Can hardly breathe anymore, I drop, clutch chest, knees to the floor.
All I speak is remorse as I wished for the power to change
Be above human, now this rage courses and sours my veins,
Less than an hour remains as the weather patterns seem to thin out
Others lives will be taken tonight beyond reasonable doubt
I feel him come out, the moon shines clear, this is past my regrets
As my nostrils flare and hairs stand erect on the back of my neck
Begin shaking within, grasp the window as it my breaks from my grip
I seem to just burst out my skin like a snake when it sheds,
My fangs grow and spread wide as I dart my red eyes
I then try to conceal the remains of the humans dead hide,
Im now on the prowl, pounce and scour the streets
My inner self cowers beneath, I thrust my head to howl and speak
Fierce predator as I endeavor the breaking prey of the night
I stray from the lights, into shadows as I escape from his sights.
Slip in behind him, silent, breath evades from my chest
I see hes draping in sweat, beads on the nape of his neck
Turn around teeth engage in his head, blood tasting of lead
Sewer drains filled with red from the pain he just met,
The skies brighten, my fur falls to the floor of cement
Replaced with flesh, the day changed me mortal again.
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Re: Of Wolf And Man

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Apr 18th, '10, 22:26

I already told you how sick this was.

Way to rip off Metallica.
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Re: Of Wolf And Man

Postby dR3 » Apr 18th, '10, 22:52

You deserve the red name, that's all I'm going to say.
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Re: Of Wolf And Man

Postby Spyder » Apr 19th, '10, 04:20

thanks guys


and yea hahaha i love metallica :wub:
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Re: Of Wolf And Man

Postby Spyder » Apr 19th, '10, 07:11

such in depth feed from a trusted member :facepalm
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Re: Of Wolf And Man

Postby Spyder » Apr 19th, '10, 07:17

well you have your opinions but no spamming this topic please and thank you
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Re: Of Wolf And Man

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Apr 19th, '10, 07:19

Nuclear wrote:I think your good, its just that im a little better.

What are you, an asshole?
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Re: Of Wolf And Man

Postby Emadyville » Apr 19th, '10, 10:38

GoodGirlsGetGutted wrote:
Nuclear wrote:I think your good, its just that im a little better.

What are you, an asshole?


Yeah he is :n:

Dope fuckin piece spyder :worship:

Loved the image it created and some multi's flowed perfectly while I read, amazing :worship:
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Re: Of Wolf And Man

Postby Spyder » Apr 20th, '10, 22:25

thanks emady :worship:

and gggg if he thinks he's better well... lets not wake him up ;)
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Re: Of Wolf And Man

Postby Fa-Q » Apr 20th, '10, 22:34

Hey Spy, did you know Nuclear? anyway good piece...love the imagery and the flow because of the multis within the bar made it an easy read...great drop
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Re: Of Wolf And Man

Postby Spyder » Apr 21st, '10, 18:21

thanks fa-q

and no i didnt, but i see his comments are gone
so im guessing he was a banned member using a second account
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