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Sicks Feat. Deep (Punchline piece)

Postby Fa-Q » Apr 27th, '10, 08:22

If you need explanation (because yall some stupid fucks) don't hesitate and I'll try to explain :smoking:

Sicks:
Sicks has censors follow him around daily, that sound maybe,
Your innocence, and your virgin ears, maybe's purging fears,
Cause sicks will get shit on you, without feeding you cyanide,
Dr. Hyde always seeks, so go please ahead and try and hide,
Cause, all yall suck "Dick" worse than five leaches of Richard,
It was inevitable, like how MTV to youth teaches the bitch word,
I'm the tenth racer, winning the race as I crunch nine,
With my sharp "spikes," and at the end a punchline,
And all you onlookers walk up saying, your run sucks,
When the rest of you are barefoot, yall wearin nonchucks,
Wearing tight pants, its like George in '08, Bush up tight,
Weak punches, your like Hanes, can't do one "Push up right"
But see the funny thing is, that all of you try still,
When you're about as "ill" as the contraction I will,
Your losses so overwhelming, that even your wins fled,
I'll slap you McNabb style, and now your skins red,


Deep:
Each one of my verses, quick bars, but I strike slow,
On your shit, you do a poorer job then Mike Rowe,
Yall are so fuckin sick, but I'm talkin the green version,
I know I'll be on top one day, like I'm a teen virgin,
Battle me, rules are simple, act wimpy then hide,
I'll leave your ass like Hillary Clinton's, empty inside,
Plus your sorrier than Bill when he got caught cheating,
Your pussy, period, there's no way your not bleeding,
I'll "diss own" you until its in full effect, the effect shun,
This is no light matter, its a dark, comple shun,
Like Nas said about Jay-Z, (D) ick (S) uckin (L) ips,
But like a sex starved diner waitress, stuck with tips,
You god fired from a bike store, couldn't handle above bars,
I'm collosal, I steal the rings of Saturn like I vandal of stars,
We all know you aint going nowhere, even with a stamp on,
You couldn't get pussy, if you were mistaken with a tampon,
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Re: Sicks Feat. Deep

Postby gutawafang » Apr 27th, '10, 10:09

On point punches from Sick.

And Deep also had nice punches.

Seems like it's all about punches. Very good. :y:
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Re: Sicks Feat. Deep

Postby classthe_king » Apr 27th, '10, 11:36

Mike Rowe is the shit dude :shakehead:
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Sicks Feat. Deep

Postby Fa-Q » Apr 27th, '10, 13:33

classthe_king wrote:Mike Rowe is the shit dude :shakehead:

Hahah I know, I'm just glad you know who he is...most don't...thanks Fish for the feed. You know that their both my verses...I just did it like "Six feet deep"
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Re: Sicks Feat. Deep

Postby classthe_king » Apr 27th, '10, 14:02

Fa-Q wrote:
classthe_king wrote:Mike Rowe is the shit dude :shakehead:

Hahah I know, I'm just glad you know who he is...most don't...thanks Fish for the feed. You know that their both my verses...I just did it like "Six feet deep"


classthe_king wrote:Relax and just bear with us, cause you cunts are so sad
I am so dirty in the booth Mike Rowe wants a Collab
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Sicks Feat. Deep

Postby Fa-Q » Apr 30th, '10, 04:56

Damn class, I swear I didn't mean to Swaggerjack you
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Re: Sicks Feat. Deep (Punchline piece)

Postby Yah-hah » Apr 30th, '10, 16:32

I actually dug it bro. Some pretty good punches. Have no fuckin idea who mike Rowe is but whatever I could kick his ass lmao Good shit
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Re: Sicks Feat. Deep (Punchline piece)

Postby Fa-Q » May 1st, '10, 02:39

Yah-hah wrote:I actually dug it bro. Some pretty good punches. Have no fuckin idea who mike Rowe is but whatever I could kick his ass lmao Good shit

lol jus...hes the guy from Dirty Jobs...btw that show is the shit
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Re: Sicks Feat. Deep (Punchline piece)

Postby Spyder » May 1st, '10, 03:25

whose sicks and deep...
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Re: Sicks Feat. Deep (Punchline piece)

Postby Fa-Q » May 1st, '10, 03:28

Spyder wrote:whose sicks and deep...

Its supposed to be like six feet deep...but I changed it like it was some kid named deep on a kid named sicks track....idk what I was thinkin lol I just wanted to unload a whoe bunch of punches
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Re: Sicks Feat. Deep (Punchline piece)

Postby Spyder » May 1st, '10, 05:32

oh well i do like that, but it is confusing
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Re: Sicks Feat. Deep (Punchline piece)

Postby Fa-Q » May 1st, '10, 07:15

Spyder wrote:oh well i do like that, but it is confusing

What did you think of the piece
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Re: Sicks Feat. Deep (Punchline piece)

Postby Spyder » May 1st, '10, 07:28

i wasnt feeling anything of Sicks

Deep has some ight punches but nuttin really stuck out side the period line, i like that

kep working on punchesmlisten to punch rappers to death
punches are the way to go
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