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Quickie 2

Postby Just Silver » May 3rd, '10, 03:55

More quick stuff until i have time from all these projects being done :D took 5min ..


Your up now but go down we emerge
Whats up clown you stay down like TR servers
Just bust pow cowards i turn beef into fine cow powders
I explode the "milk" in the chlorine in the bottle tilted
I cant even spill this its too pilfered
Im super rotten nasty cruising with a Luger in the backseat
So foolish imma do this till it attracts heat
Exactly how they thought the record backs me
Its the sale or the crisis
How you living large when you dont know what life is
Precise shit in a vice grip got weed in my room like a ficus
Can't price it its priceless not 21 but ive mastered my cards
Got plenty done but see the clamors begun
when you hit college and your conscience has sprung
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Re: Quickie 2

Postby DƎRDYPK » May 3rd, '10, 03:59

real nice for a quickie bro :worship:
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Re: Quickie 2

Postby Just Silver » May 7th, '10, 00:50

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Re: Quickie 2

Postby Fa-Q » May 7th, '10, 01:12

Hey not bad Silv? Where you been....not bad punches, sims, and metas but you still got to work on the structure and syllables matchin up....not bad though keep it up
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Re: Quickie 2

Postby Just Silver » May 7th, '10, 01:39

Fa-Q wrote:Hey not bad Silv? Where you been....not bad punches, sims, and metas but you still got to work on the structure and syllables matchin up....not bad though keep it up

Yea just a quick thing didnt really analyze syllables but yea ive been gone because its the end of my senior year and now i have tons of projects plus TR has been down for a long time
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Re: Quickie 2

Postby Ticalrecords » May 7th, '10, 01:53

damn i was gon use that down like TR servers line... but yeah dude its legit, pick some of the lines apart n expand n u cud come up w a solid 16

btw check out my shit i jus dropped 2 pieces tht r worth a read.
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