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BILI asked me to post this

Postby BILI » May 5th, '10, 20:16

This is something new he did and he asked me to post it

You can put me in a pit and I`ll be a free man,just link me wit oxygen.com
If I hit you wit all my heads,it`ll explode like hydrogen bomb
You`re a pussy and I`ll trow you in a bin so you can recycle
And only blood you ever saw is from a menstrual cycle
Yoo,I`ll shoot you in your butt and call you an Asshole
Then run you over wit a train and stomp on your depressed soul
See first I took your life,now I`m gonna take your style
Change everyones lifestyle and make`em run 4 miles
I take everything for half it is,check it again it IS a diss
"BILI`s whack"-I`ll chop anyone who ever says this
Ima rapper equpied wit the power of thelepathy and telekanises
And fuckin hotter to watch then Apathy killing your nieces


All I can say is wow at the first bar

I wrote explanation for some,cause I didnt get some of the shit first time I read it:
1.Bar-Its like:Brad Pitt and Morgan Freeman have a movie called 7 together,so I`ll hit you wit all my 7 heads,and hydrogen=Hydra,the monster
2.Bar-Recycle Bin,everybody got that,then pussy-menstrual cycle
3.Bar-Shoot in but-asshole,lol and train-soul Soul-Train baby
Everything alse is easy to get
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Re: BILI asked me to post this

Postby Yah-hah » May 5th, '10, 20:20

Yo tell that fool Yah-hah said to hit him up sometime. Shits dope
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: BILI asked me to post this

Postby BILI » May 5th, '10, 22:05

Yah-hah wrote:Yo tell that fool Yah-hah said to hit him up sometime. Shits dope

will do :flower:
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Re: BILI asked me to post this

Postby classthe_king » May 6th, '10, 00:57

This is alot better then where you were at last time I saw you. You're getting better word play even though I don't think those three bars needed explaining. Flow is alright, some unneeded syllables so it could be better. Work on your rhymes too. Multis make everything sound alot better.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: BILI asked me to post this

Postby BILI » May 8th, '10, 11:25

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Re: BILI asked me to post this

Postby ShaBruv » May 8th, '10, 14:00

fire
I know you want to retaliate but you won't dare,
Cause you fuckin with some ****** like this who just don't care.

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Re: BILI asked me to post this

Postby BILI » May 9th, '10, 17:08

ShadyBruvaz wrote:fire

:y:
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Re: BILI asked me to post this

Postby gutawafang » May 10th, '10, 03:24

Gutawafang told me it was fucking sick. :worship:
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Re: BILI asked me to post this

Postby classthe_king » May 10th, '10, 03:41

gutawafang wrote:Gutawafang told me it was fucking sick. :worship:


No, that isn't actually BILI :laughing:
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: BILI asked me to post this

Postby gutawafang » May 10th, '10, 03:43

classthe_king wrote:
gutawafang wrote:Gutawafang told me it was fucking sick. :worship:


No, that isn't actually BILI :laughing:

Hahaha. Word. I know man. Just playing around. :D
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Re: BILI asked me to post this

Postby BILI » May 10th, '10, 08:14

^^ :laughing: :laughing: :laughing:
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