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Is Love This Stupid?

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Is Love This Stupid?

Postby gutawafang » May 10th, '10, 04:57

I wrote this for a friend who really really is feeling like this.

Love is trapping yourself in a cage.
Your master gives you the key to free yourself.
You reshape the fucking key
By bending it.

So you can’t get out.
You lock yourself in
To consume the pain
Like it’s Cadbury.

So it’s a cage of luxury.
A cage is your dream house.
You cry in it and then you sleep in it.
You buying it and then you bleed in it.

Love is trapping yourself in a cage.
Your master gives you the key to free yourself.
You reshape the fucking key
By bending it.
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Re: Is Love This Stupid?

Postby Fa-Q » May 10th, '10, 08:39

What is the point of all this, in all due respect
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Re: Is Love This Stupid?

Postby gutawafang » May 10th, '10, 08:42

Fa-Q wrote:What is the point of all this, in all due respect

I was counseling a friend who has this complicated relationship. And I happened to make this poem on the spot.
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Re: Is Love This Stupid?

Postby Fa-Q » May 10th, '10, 08:49

gutawafang wrote:
Fa-Q wrote:What is the point of all this, in all due respect

I was counseling a friend who has this complicated relationship. And I happened to make this poem on the spot.

Oh ok well its good...I did something like that only it was 4 haikus...
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Re: Is Love This Stupid?

Postby gutawafang » May 11th, '10, 01:55

thanks fror checking it out man :happy:
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