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I'm Sorry

Postby MC Anonymous » May 12th, '10, 23:58

I'm sorry for dishonor, sorry to my momma, promise,
tell me when I am a father, people will know i am honest
honorable person, who knows of nothing aggressive
without words of discontention, defection, or lessened mentions
You're what I need and want, and I'm sorry we streamed apart
and I'm sorry my steaming heart, rejected your seeping heart
Just don't leave me in the dark, please, family so stand with me
Disregard the foolish vanity, I know you're mad at me
sorry for the apathy, carelessness and the tragedy
You're willing to throw away a tapestry that you had with me?
For what? I'm terrible, I know it, I don't have to see
violence in your soul, to know that I'm a rotten seed
and look at where my foolish arrogance has gotten me
Nothing but my sister running away in forgotten seas
love you, your my everything, everything I could ever be
I just want you back with me, for all eternity

Come up to meet you,
Tell you I'm sorry,
You don't know how lovely you are,
I had to find you
Tell you I need you
Tell you I set you...apart...

Every day that goes by, nothing changes but apologies
Your lies are just a mockery, I'm sorry but they bother me
How am I supposed to know what's fake and what's reality
Everything you say to me is prying at my sanity
fake my happiness, and hide from people who are loving me
greatest actors are the people forced to by the public, see...
I don't even know what's me, or what I should be open too
even if I spoke to you, nothing is real emotional
What am I supposed to do, What am I supposed to feel
Who am I supposed to go to when I don't know what is real
I can hide inside like introspective thoughts, and fade away
Or take this game and play, and cry the pain away like every day
I eat myself alive, knowing that I only have
Me inside this lonely path, to walk on, time has slowly passed
I'm sorry for the insecurities I may have caused
The only thing I have, is bended knees to pray to God

Come up to meet you,
Tell you I'm sorry,
You don't know how lovely you are,
I had to find you
Tell you I need you
Tell you I set you...apart...
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: I'm Sorry

Postby classthe_king » May 13th, '10, 00:00

You already know this is amazing :worship:
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: I'm Sorry

Postby shadyrecovery420 » May 13th, '10, 00:04

MC Anonymous wrote:I'm sorry for dishonor, sorry to my momma, promise,
tell me when I am a father, people will know i am honest
honorable person, who knows of nothing aggressive
without words of discontention, defection, or lessened mentions
You're what I need and want, and I'm sorry we streamed apart
and I'm sorry my steaming heart, rejected your seeping heart
Just don't leave me in the dark, please, family so stand with me
Disregard the foolish vanity, I know you're mad at me
sorry for the apathy, carelessness and the tragedy
You're willing to throw away a tapestry that you had with me?
For what? I'm terrible, I know it, I don't have to see
violence in your soul, to know that I'm a rotten seed
and look at where my foolish arrogance has gotten me
Nothing but my sister running away in forgotten seas
love you, your my everything, everything I could ever be
I just want you back with me, for all eternity

Come up to meet you,
Tell you I'm sorry,
You don't know how lovely you are,
I had to find you
Tell you I need you
Tell you I set you...apart...

Every day that goes by, nothing changes but apologies
Your lies are just a mockery, I'm sorry but they bother me
How am I supposed to know what's fake and what's reality
Everything you say to me is prying at my sanity
fake my happiness, and hide from people who are loving me
greatest actors are the people forced to by the public, see...
I don't even know what's me, or what I should be open too
even if I spoke to you, nothing is real emotional
What am I supposed to do, What am I supposed to feel
Who am I supposed to go to when I don't know what is real
I can hide inside like introspective thoughts, and fade away
Or take this game and play, and cry the pain away like every day
I eat myself alive, knowing that I only have
Me inside this lonely path, to walk on, time has slowly passed
I'm sorry for the insecurities I may have caused
The only thing I have, is bended knees to pray to God

Come up to meet you,
Tell you I'm sorry,
You don't know how lovely you are,
I had to find you
Tell you I need you
Tell you I set you...apart...



:o your back! i thought u got permenatley banned
THC

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Re: I'm Sorry

Postby MC Anonymous » May 13th, '10, 00:12

shadyrecovery420 wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:I'm sorry for dishonor, sorry to my momma, promise,
tell me when I am a father, people will know i am honest
honorable person, who knows of nothing aggressive
without words of discontention, defection, or lessened mentions
You're what I need and want, and I'm sorry we streamed apart
and I'm sorry my steaming heart, rejected your seeping heart
Just don't leave me in the dark, please, family so stand with me
Disregard the foolish vanity, I know you're mad at me
sorry for the apathy, carelessness and the tragedy
You're willing to throw away a tapestry that you had with me?
For what? I'm terrible, I know it, I don't have to see
violence in your soul, to know that I'm a rotten seed
and look at where my foolish arrogance has gotten me
Nothing but my sister running away in forgotten seas
love you, your my everything, everything I could ever be
I just want you back with me, for all eternity

Come up to meet you,
Tell you I'm sorry,
You don't know how lovely you are,
I had to find you
Tell you I need you
Tell you I set you...apart...

Every day that goes by, nothing changes but apologies
Your lies are just a mockery, I'm sorry but they bother me
How am I supposed to know what's fake and what's reality
Everything you say to me is prying at my sanity
fake my happiness, and hide from people who are loving me
greatest actors are the people forced to by the public, see...
I don't even know what's me, or what I should be open too
even if I spoke to you, nothing is real emotional
What am I supposed to do, What am I supposed to feel
Who am I supposed to go to when I don't know what is real
I can hide inside like introspective thoughts, and fade away
Or take this game and play, and cry the pain away like every day
I eat myself alive, knowing that I only have
Me inside this lonely path, to walk on, time has slowly passed
I'm sorry for the insecurities I may have caused
The only thing I have, is bended knees to pray to God

Come up to meet you,
Tell you I'm sorry,
You don't know how lovely you are,
I had to find you
Tell you I need you
Tell you I set you...apart...



:o your back! i thought u got permenatley banned

:confusion: Who's this?
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: I'm Sorry

Postby BILI » May 13th, '10, 00:14

MC Anonymous wrote:
shadyrecovery420 wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:I'm sorry for dishonor, sorry to my momma, promise,
tell me when I am a father, people will know i am honest
honorable person, who knows of nothing aggressive
without words of discontention, defection, or lessened mentions
You're what I need and want, and I'm sorry we streamed apart
and I'm sorry my steaming heart, rejected your seeping heart
Just don't leave me in the dark, please, family so stand with me
Disregard the foolish vanity, I know you're mad at me
sorry for the apathy, carelessness and the tragedy
You're willing to throw away a tapestry that you had with me?
For what? I'm terrible, I know it, I don't have to see
violence in your soul, to know that I'm a rotten seed
and look at where my foolish arrogance has gotten me
Nothing but my sister running away in forgotten seas
love you, your my everything, everything I could ever be
I just want you back with me, for all eternity

Come up to meet you,
Tell you I'm sorry,
You don't know how lovely you are,
I had to find you
Tell you I need you
Tell you I set you...apart...

Every day that goes by, nothing changes but apologies
Your lies are just a mockery, I'm sorry but they bother me
How am I supposed to know what's fake and what's reality
Everything you say to me is prying at my sanity
fake my happiness, and hide from people who are loving me
greatest actors are the people forced to by the public, see...
I don't even know what's me, or what I should be open too
even if I spoke to you, nothing is real emotional
What am I supposed to do, What am I supposed to feel
Who am I supposed to go to when I don't know what is real
I can hide inside like introspective thoughts, and fade away
Or take this game and play, and cry the pain away like every day
I eat myself alive, knowing that I only have
Me inside this lonely path, to walk on, time has slowly passed
I'm sorry for the insecurities I may have caused
The only thing I have, is bended knees to pray to God

Come up to meet you,
Tell you I'm sorry,
You don't know how lovely you are,
I had to find you
Tell you I need you
Tell you I set you...apart...



:o your back! i thought u got permenatley banned

:confusion: Who's this?

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