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Spyder +Class - Brass Bars

Postby Spyder » May 15th, '10, 20:53

Sentus
It’s the five star generals rippin with hot knives
Spittin at mach five till were hittin your top five
Shittin on yall pride, bars hard like I spew fossils
I spit quicker cause I’m sicker then blue waffles
You’re too docile, get maimed cause my flow is hot
And if you shook ill leave you flat like soda pop
I know the top is high, my desire will get me far
I’m goin crazy like Paris Hilton when I’m in these bars
You a bitch rapper, sellin out like Disney stars
So sick this Christmas the doctor sent me cards
If you tempt me hard I eliminate a foe with ease
Put you in the dirt like a curve ball below the knees
I rose to seize this game cause I’m the best in it
In a verse every line’s sick like a health clinic
My flow melts when it touches like yo lighter
Sentus spit hotter than the Large Hadron Collider
I’m so hot if I spit in the winter an entire nation
Of bears immediately come out of hibernation
Any fighters facin doom; me n the mic’s an ill couple
My rhymes fuck you up worse than Bill Tuttle
Your rebuttal is useless, I hate all you do badly
Gimmie one verse, you won’t come out like Boo Radley
You wack G, I’m blowing up like torpedo’s
Wanna battle but don’t speak like Melinda Sordino
You’re planning to come and beat me and Spyder
Won’t pull it off like a condom while you’re inside her
So we keep gettin higher, destruction in each heart beat
To bite me you’d need megaladon shark teeth
Our flow sparks heat, show the promo before shaking him
Breaking him, bitch you put the homo before sapien
With you I just sit back, and I still own the fight
You’re beating yourself like a nerdy kid alone at night

Spyder
Lot of braggin on here, no one listens to you
gotta Turn This Player On, ‘no pause’, im Hittin Resume,
dropped a verse rocked the nurse, Cum In The Delivery Room
Moms Pants Still Wet, shit I Spit In The Womb.
You mine ‘Sun’, Stars out, y’all missing ya crew
this aint Serious Beef, just a Bored Game, aint getting the Clue.
talks about my weight like Ive got some fat when
Your arteries like Crips, no Blood Passin
Your dumb ass done, in one track n, insists I Bit Him
Stole Your Style Made it Better like Im ya ‘Spittin Image’.
bitch Jenna Jameson, ‘Never Spits, just ‘Keeps It Inside’
So if I Ever Bit just proves I could Eat You Alive,
beefin aside, its whatever let the stories be told
Im not on the Normal Path shit, left Tracks Split… Fork In The Road
Im passin the Class, you fail, left starin and you,
‘Aint in the Game’, Just Commentate so now you Stripped like Erin Andrews.
moved to audio, cause my text it just simply
‘Fucked This Whole Place’… Sex In The City
respected emcee, everyone wants the belt when I speak
‘No Games’ im the Boss, you aint on the ‘Level I Be’.
rappers comin after me, being the best is their Dream
Condoms By My Bed, gotta stay Protected In Sleep.
I ‘See Lines’ like ‘Shudder Shades’, not what you expectin
Im the Punishment After Class like School Detention.
Generals back, now that the mood has set in
think y’all ‘Ape’s-Real, First’… just Fools Be Reppin
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Re: Spyder +Class - Brass Bars

Postby Tash8 » May 15th, '10, 21:17

class

Our flow sparks heat, show the promo before shaking him
Breaking him, bitch you put the homo before sapien
With you I just sit back, and I still own the fight
You’re beating yourself like a nerdy kid alone at night

great ending to ur verse

spyder, again i'm impressed with ur flow..good job on that
edit: spyder my fav line from u
this aint Serious Beef, just a Bored Game, aint getting the Clue.
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Re: Spyder +Class - Brass Bars

Postby Spyder » May 15th, '10, 22:58

thanks for peepin tash :worship:
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Re: Spyder +Class - Brass Bars

Postby Fa-Q » May 16th, '10, 04:57

Damn both went hard on this...Class had great flow and I loved that hibernation line...

And Spy...oh shit I loved that boredgame/Clue line....big props to both of yall
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Re: Spyder +Class - Brass Bars

Postby Spyder » May 16th, '10, 05:12

thanks bro

damn i didnt really like that punch that much hahaha but glad others do :D
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