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Coleon - The Island

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Coleon - The Island

Postby DƎRDYPK » May 17th, '10, 07:29

I'v been PMing Cole on another site he's been at & he wanted me to post this for him
so Imma do so & go to bed :sleeping:

Cole wrote:My skin blistered with cracks and thin fissures
the boat swayed, as it did for days on this venture
the sun shimmered onto my deluded mind
this God forsaken water lead to my crews demise
deceased, and confined, to sleep on the ocean floor
cannabalized survivors, for life cause I deserved it more
cursed to the core, my lips ached for water
my body needed nourishment, skin baked and soldered
my life was altered, as an island broke the horizon
I was too weak to move, but escaped this confinement
boat scraped so violent, upon the rocky beach shore
I was carried by something, not human, a creature
slept a year, it seemed for, strapped down to a table
in a laboratory, bright lights, with masses of cables
one in my nasal, dozens through my chest cavity
heart monitors, and screens to keep track of me
The world went black to me, I awoke in a cage
I opened it, amazed, at this castle that displayed
science of baffling array, lead me to a stair case
I thought it over, the decision that I there faced
explore this scary place and find my captor
or escape right now, through a window or cracked door
I chose the latter, and climbed to the top of it
went through a wooden door, with “Murea” inscribed on top of it
opened it, astonishing, there was a man with a mirror
showed my reflection, there was a beast, it was clearer
I screamed in terror, but heard a growl from my throat
The beast inside me uncaged, and it was now that I awoke
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Re: Coleon - The Island

Postby classthe_king » May 17th, '10, 20:00

I thought he was goona stop writing
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Coleon - The Island

Postby gutawafang » May 18th, '10, 07:17

Vocab. :worship:
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