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BP has fallen short in providing oil leak data, says US

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Re: BP has fallen short in providing oil leak data, says US

Postby SliK » May 21st, '10, 06:57

Good flow but I had trouble grasping the rhyme sceme. Also, try adding some punchlines or metaphors to keep the reader interested.
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