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Quick 10 bars

Postby Just Silver » May 23rd, '10, 18:43

I talk small burners not the back of the stove
I mean the real shit that be cracking your dome
Some facts should be known that I have been attacking with chrome
If im crazy i'll take some pills and blackout with the gnomes
But for now i suppose this is what i propose
To any of you faggots that get into my mode
You can't do what i do because i can't do what i've done
I mean legally son you really think I mean guns
I'm just the bad day harry up for a case of beer
Awake with sweat and tears and look in the mirror
Get my glass pen just to make shit clearer
Higher than aspens when i write my actions
So high i see rainbows and lights infraction
The white attraction that has been right on the track with
A rollercoaster captain up and down rapping
And no love tunnels unless we talk pussy
No doves i shove my white fudge in her cookie
But lookie lookie heres another way i get nookie
Write a love poem on a chloroform
And i sign her name because my morals gone


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Re: Quick 10 bars

Postby Just Silver » May 23rd, '10, 21:54

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Re: Quick 10 bars

Postby classthe_king » May 23rd, '10, 22:30

Why would you bump something that hadn't gone down at all
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Quick 10 bars

Postby Just Silver » May 23rd, '10, 23:52

classthe_king wrote:Why would you bump something that hadn't gone down at all

Whats that mean :confusion:
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Re: Quick 10 bars

Postby classthe_king » May 24th, '10, 00:12

do you know what bump means
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Quick 10 bars

Postby Just Silver » May 24th, '10, 00:14

classthe_king wrote:do you know what bump means

yea when u dont get feed and your topic isnt displayed on the front list it puts it back up so its more noticeable right?
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