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Looks Perfect (N.E.W)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jun 10th, '10, 12:50

feeds will be returned

Transcending light,
fullfilling each click.
Responds with an
erection, flash backs
holding memories past.
First person point of view,
the all seeing eye.
Visions of forshadowed
deception, moved easily
with motion to stand still
within the red light. Plastered
on film hence emotion is
grasped.

Looks are deceiving my eyes are bleeding I hide behind scenes
Of what seems so crimson my mental in prison they hate me
Thoughts of envy proceed to poke me like a swarm of killer bees
I heed from what seemed as clever schemes of fallacies
These people putting up facades camouflaged they dodge
The eye to eye contact you snobs so fake dirty like oral jobs
Not perfected your infected they flash with a filthy photic
Disarrayed, so hopeless the deceit I scoped it
Fiction drowns facts backbone implodes backs
Bones so narrow words so shallow people only swallow
Your falsity in seasons of Hallow

The shutter closes, light transcends the late evenings pillaging
An aura translucent, moves with the epitome of tranquility
Not photosynthesis but the photo's synthesis happens faster
The actions captured, lips interlocked in passionate rapture
Fuang shuay exhibited, make way with limits if
They are meant to be broken by the motives in parenthesis
Seems as though Gaia is patient n ordered, nay, saints n orders
When the scene is published theres no bad karma to taint the borders
The couple lounges, with every bit of an essence of leisure
The atmosphere is rich, with a presence of wealth to the readers
Selflessly leads her, well he does with the fairest embrace
Eyes closed, hands entwined minds aligned when pairin of grace
Kinetic energy transfers in between the numb breathing
Some feelings, are replaced when two minds become one being

An album of beautiful body
language, speaking although silent.
Images relived in a timeless capsule,
Fingering pressure with tensions highten.
Painting every expression visible,
soley for the world is my canvas.
The index of vision keeps me content.

Flashing lights are deminished for every type is forbidden
More so the night to see passion's flight as ripe as the women
Or dispite the forgiven visions who fight for remembrance..
..of these cliche poses possibly right for the lenses
Should I recite the beginning coarses which forces the cam..
..era age of scape goats, trojan horses, and scams
Focus is straight to the point opens the shutter to slam

Enjoy ,,
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Re: Looks Perfect (N.E.W)

Postby gutawafang » Jun 11th, '10, 01:56

Goddamn motherfucking crazy good vocabulary got me hooked, homie! :worship:

Fucking crazy shit all the way man. I love the flow, prolly because I understood the mutlis. Read it twice man, it's worth recording. Fucking poetic, and good vocab to entice the minds man. Nice. :y:
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Re: Looks Perfect (N.E.W)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jun 11th, '10, 18:35

gutawafang wrote:Goddamn motherfucking crazy good vocabulary got me hooked, homie! :worship:

Fucking crazy shit all the way man. I love the flow, prolly because I understood the mutlis. Read it twice man, it's worth recording. Fucking poetic, and good vocab to entice the minds man. Nice. :y:


thnaks guta , glad u liked it bro ,,, :worship: :worship:
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Re: Looks Perfect (N.E.W)

Postby classthe_king » Jun 11th, '10, 19:25

Agree with Guta. Dope shit man :worship:
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Re: Looks Perfect (N.E.W)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jun 12th, '10, 21:48

classthe_king wrote:Agree with Guta. Dope shit man :worship:


thanks ,, bro ,, glad u liked it , :flower:
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