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Negatives of Positives.

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 13th, '10, 01:05

When a baby is born, that's when a baby has died
an explosion hit a building, then a lady survived
but the lady was the bomber, she was meant to be dead
yet the firefighters rescued, we was left in the red
an abortion failed to terminate, the baby was evil
It grew up to have a yearning face, killed ladies and people
I survived a fatal overdose, it made me deceitful
Every place that showed religion had me shady to steeples
Everything I've ever loved brought me hate in return
Went to God to ask for help, but he gave me an urn
I'm famous in mentality but little to nothing
in realities that matter, stay belittling something
or someones motivation for the sake of my vision
takes a death of someone's life to see awakened eyes glisten
or a suicide of someone for awareness of hurting
A person goes to school but is embarrassed of learning
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Negatives of Positives.

Postby DƎRDYPK » Jun 13th, '10, 01:13

nice stuff bro
really nice stuff :b:
can't wait till we get this mixtape out :smoking:
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Re: Negatives of Positives.

Postby ShaBruv » Jun 13th, '10, 12:37

proper, good and you have a mixtape coming out? i might hav to cop that, as long as the cover aint canibus's ugly face
I know you want to retaliate but you won't dare,
Cause you fuckin with some ****** like this who just don't care.

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Re: Negatives of Positives.

Postby BILI » Jun 13th, '10, 15:10

MC Anonymous wrote:When a baby is born, that's when a baby has died
an explosion hit a building, then a lady survived
but the lady was the bomber, she was meant to be dead
yet the firefighters rescued, we was left in the red
an abortion failed to terminate, the baby was evil
It grew up to have a yearning face, killed ladies and people
I survived a fatal overdose, it made me deceitful
Every place that showed religion had me shady to steeples
Everything I've ever loved brought me hate in return
Went to God to ask for help, but he gave me an urn
I'm famous in mentality but little to nothing
in realities that matter, stay belittling something
or someones motivation for the sake of my vision
takes a death of someone's life to see awakened eyes glisten
or a suicide of someone for awareness of hurting
A person goes to school but is embarrassed of learning

Yeah its a nice piece,had some dope rhymes,flow was awesome,it flowed really good for me,
My fav bar
an abortion failed to terminate, the baby was evil
It grew up to have a yearning face, killed ladies and people


Yeah its good,even tho I expected more from the title,it sounded so dope,very interesting title "Negatives of Positives" :y:
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