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Unearthed Competition

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Unearthed Competition

Postby Spyder » Jun 9th, '10, 00:12

nothings pointed out, please look for punches and what not


This game changed to nobodies who think its fun to spit
Jack some crappy rappers style, try run with it
New cats is douche bags tryin to come with numbers when
My career on point, acupuncturist
When is it enough whyd it come to this
Will I be able to get up once the slumber hits.
Lots of rappers actin bad, need of punishment
I keep speakin in tongues to leave em stunned and shit.
Come n spit, you test the master you less than average
I just turn you ghost, flesh subtracted
Mention my name you address the baddest
Puttin haters to rest a habit… chest to mattress
Y’all have met an addict of aggressive rappin
So when I bless the tracks it to bed in caskets.
My bar invasion incarceration to part the nation
As many lines as stars in space so guard ya face kid
You not hard lets face it, you sing simplicity
You watchin the game I be in the screen
Think you playin me but cant even get to me
You just playin Wii so when swing you missin me
We not equal no synchronicity, is that a call?
When I make a diss you see these rappers fall
So if you a witness in this don’t get ya ass involed
Your back to wall, bring my battle squad and that is all.
This document cannot mock my confidence
I am not a vet nor a prophet yet, soon enough I promise this
So any compliment just reassures my accomplishments
Be not upset as I am not flaunting cockiness.
Soon as my claws are set y’all are dead
So its off to rocketships to see who I can target next
Havent thought of launchin yet, some sights ive got to see
So if I wander off its probably the astronomy.


Theres not a fella on earth to better this verse
So its almost kinda like on this level im cursed,
We just set and observe rap and let it get worse
Bunch of phony fags who want it dead in a hearse
Bed in the dirt, new dude think we blessed with his birth
He hard, switch to these bars like calisthenics didn’t work.
If I said it I meant it for sure, never regretted a word
Honesty my policy so let it be heard.
Let me take this breath to assure, ive come to relieve the pain
Its like I heal the game soon as you speak my name
I ease the rain like season change, you aint a challenge see
I battle emcees you just look to increase ya salary
So if we spit together its track catastrophe
Sayin you even half of me is blasphemy.
Cause actually attack of the clones there ought to be
So I get some challenge on this rock ya see
Drug fanatic shot on streets I drop with E’s
Kickin knowledge, Hawkings head, soccer prodigy.
Talkin lots of G’s and your properties
When I got this whole place like Monopoly.
Took it over with the smooth lightning flow speed
Don’t bite the tone G just leave the mic alone please
Thoughts left… now that I right your dome piece
Cause on these lines of mine you might just OD
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Re: Unearthed Competition

Postby classthe_king » Jun 9th, '10, 15:07

Hmmmm. I thought this was pretty weak. The only line I liked was the one about calestinics. It seemed like it was just random rhyming. Maybe I didn't get the punches but honestly if I can't get the punches sitting here reading it and studying it then its not a good punch.
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Re: Unearthed Competition

Postby Spyder » Jun 9th, '10, 19:24

or your just not complex enough...

but thanks for peeping
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Re: Unearthed Competition

Postby Spyder » Jun 13th, '10, 02:00

bump :'(
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Re: Unearthed Competition

Postby BILI » Jun 13th, '10, 15:25

I have to agree wit class,it had some dope rhyming,but I coudnt find that many punches,and the ones I noticed arent that impressive,I mean they`re cool but nothin made me go wow,ya dig?I liked 2nd piece more then first,nice vocab I have to say :y:
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Re: Unearthed Competition

Postby Liquid_Fangs » Jun 13th, '10, 15:32

delete this part
Drug fanatic shot on streets I drop with E’s
Kickin knowledge, Hawkings head, soccer prodigy.
Talkin lots of G’s and your properties
When I got this whole place like Monopoly.
Took it over with the smooth lightning flow speed
Don’t bite the tone G just leave the mic alone please
Thoughts left… now that I right your dome piece
Cause on these lines of mine you might just OD

really weak punches, like embarrassingly weak for your skill level of rhyming, internals, and multies

good flow but I didn't like any punches except the calisthenics and acupuncturist ones

idk just kinda seemed like that same old whoo blahh we've all heard a thousand times

but anyway nice structure and keep at it :y: I'll def be peeping you in the future
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Re: Unearthed Competition

Postby Spyder » Jun 13th, '10, 18:46

thanks bro, yeah weak punches as it wasnt a punches piece. the quoted comment i made tends to make it seem that way though lol

but this was made to record maybe why its skimpy. but thanks for checkin man
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Re: Unearthed Competition

Postby BILI » Jun 13th, '10, 22:58

Spyder wrote:thanks bro, yeah weak punches as it wasnt a punches piece. the quoted comment i made tends to make it seem that way though lol

but this was made to record maybe why its skimpy. but thanks for checkin man

You should post the beat then,on which you want to record it on,that way it`ll maybe sound doper,ya know?
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Re: Unearthed Competition

Postby Spyder » Jun 13th, '10, 23:49

^word, ill do that when i get to my computer
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