I Brought It Upon Myself

[Solace]

Been bested, stressed, depressed, pressures floored me,
You'd never know me, patience stretched and torn see,
The pen's my only friend, though it's ink is flowing thin,
In a darker place now where all the walls start closing in,
I've tried the hide this demon inside with Titan brute,
Now it's time to drop by tonight to say "How nice of you"
For glaring and staring at the hate that I went through,
Now it's only natural for me to hate the sight of you,
Don't walk up to me, friendship? I hope you bluffing,
Go for broke, hope you hoes know I owe you nothing,
Known to diss, a hopeless kid, his temper was melting man,
Looked around, hoping for an outstretched helping hand,
I was dying in mind, I let the news and truth explode in,
I was crying inside but I'm so proud I refused to show it,
My existance is odd debris, left with it a touch of solid grief,
And I'm left knowing it's my fault..What the fuck is wrong with me?

[77o77]

I felt the flow nicely.

Btw nice avatar

[classthe_king]

Don't know how I missed this. I fed on msn but i'll say again dope ass verse

[gutawafang]

this is crazy good man. inspiring. good flow. maybe use more big words, would be better.

[Solace]

:y:
I felt the flow nicely.

Btw nice avatar

Thanks. And word you know you love that shit.

Don't know how I missed this. I fed on msn but i'll say again dope ass verse

Thanks broski

this is crazy good man. inspiring. good flow. maybe use more big words, would be better.

Thanks Fish!