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Some bars i wrote in a sec, (Malevolence)

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Some bars i wrote in a sec, (Malevolence)

Postby ShaBruv » Jun 16th, '10, 00:07

Never heard a rhyme like this
Delve knee deep in the rap abyss
Ready yourself for a lyrical bliss
Better than me, nah it dont exist
I don't think you understand the relavance of my words,
cause you cant comprehend the malevolence that ive heard
The wretched lines, distorting my blistering mind
Etched upon the rhyme, contorting my twisting spine
Cause its music that shapes you as an MC and a person
Whether you use it to make songs full of empty cursin'
Abuse rape, murder, i depict all of these in my verse 'n'
Now i'm gonna make a change my position im reversin
Reflecting on my days, with inquisition, i been dreamen,
Of a better war of living, wish the stars were still gleaming,
Now i may seem soppy but homie that is unseeming
because if you cross me y'all fucking wish that you were screaming,
What fuck has happened to hip hope , just cuz i been gona while?
Well guess what the sheriffs back in town and he's fucking volatile,
And by the end its obvious you wont wanna tussle but reconcile,
But when im done with you, you wont have the muscles t' freakin smile



Hidden Track lol (OMG)
Expectations on my shoulders, like boulders, my back is foldin'
Shoulder blades erodin' from this heavy load i'm holdin,
Life goes much too slow and everyday i'm growing cold 'n'
Now i'm stuck self loathing, but fuck it i'll stop the scoldin'
I'm gettin where i want, fuck those who stop me and the haters
Cuz my goals are so high i'm gon' need escalators
Fuck the undecided, divided, and debators
Can't follow in my footsteps , but you can step in my crators
Now i'm rolling with Lewis and of course there's Justin Kanzah
Its he who approves my verse when i begin to bust my stanzah
I dont have much cash but soon i'll hit the bonanza
I aint a millionaire but fucker this is my final answer,
I know you want to retaliate but you won't dare,
Cause you fuckin with some ****** like this who just don't care.

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