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Postby exco_21 » Jun 16th, '10, 23:54

is a lil bit wrong write because im from slovakia language lil bit problem i do rymes on my country but english is wery hard i try thanks

HELLO MY FRENDS ..HELOO WHO are GIVE ME A CHANCE ..
SOME DAY S .. SOME YEAR S .. I WANT TO BE THE GREATES
HEY SHADY .. I KNOW ABOUT YOU .. YOU ARE CRAZY ..
I .M THE AKIN LIFE . FUCKIN LIFE.. ALL ARE CLERGY
SOME LIKE FAMOUS LIKE JAY z ,YEA HE IS LAZY
I M STUPID SLOVAK .. BUT I KNOW THAT ..
NEVER .. GIVE CHANCE ..IN THIS FUCKIN WORLDS ..
IF I SEE YOUR NEW ..SONG . I M WILL LOSTED MY WORDS
I TRIED ,,,TO SUCESSFULL ..
BUD I CANT,, I TRIED EVERY DAYS.. CHANCE WHEN I GIVE THEM
I DONT UNDERSTAND .. WHEN I GOINN UP ..
WHEN IS THE LEVEL TOP ..THE ROOF GROVING UP S
LOOK IN MY SIDE.. SOMEBODY STOPING ME .IF I SOMETHING PLANNING .
ALMOST PEOPLE .NOT UNDERSTAND ME ..IN MY MEANING ..
MY DREAM ..MY THINKING IS VERY GOOD
IN THE FUTURE .. I WONT SEE CROSS MY HOOD
LET ME SEE THE BACK ...
IN MY CITY ALWAYS SECOND PERSON USE THE CRACK ..
THAT S COOL FOR HIM ..BUT I CANT STAY I WILL LEAVE
OKEY ..IT WILL BE OKEY ..NO .. NEVER OKEY
18 YEARS I PLAYED ICE HOECKY ....
THE TRAINERS... SAY ME YOUR ARE NOOB ...
TOLD ME . YOU NEVER WILL PLAY ANOTHER CLUB ..
THE TIME IS UP .. MY TIME IS UP ..
SOMETHING .. CHANGE ME A LIL BIT IN LIFE . IN THE TOP ER ..
YEAS YOU THINK .DUSAN WON A MILION POUNDS OF JOKER ..
NO ..THAT S VERY GOOD.BUT DID NOT.. BUT IM SORY DIE FOR PROOF ..
I HAVE MILION PROBLEMS.. I CANT WRITE TO ENGLISH ..
MY HEART ..MY OPINIONIS A MY WITNESS
IATELY IS MUCH AFFAIR GOIN TO WRONG WAY
MY WAY ... MY WAY .. DIED ONE DAY ..
ON MOMENT .. ONE OPORTUNITY .. I M LOOKING LOOSE YOURSELF..
IT WAS MY FIRS DOING WHAT I SAW MYSELF
IN MY MIND I M THE AIRPLANES .. WHICH I DID KNOW ROUTE
THE AFRICAN PEOPLE DONT NOW WHAT IS THE ROUTER
I FEEL LIKE AT THE FIRST TIME MONKEY SEE MONKEY DO ..
THIS RHYMES .. ALL FOR YOU ..
THE MUCH FEELS WHEN I FEELING ..I CANT DESCRIBE ON THIS PAPER ..
I WILL I HOPE ..THE MY EMAGE ...WILL BE CHANGE ..
I HOPE MY CHANCE ... .. BEY
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