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Emotion

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 11th, '10, 13:56

I got a pain in my heart, it shot like rain in the dark
knowing I'm sane but a spark can cause my brain to depart
I'm lost, alone and I'm scared, but I can never turn back
A cost of bones that are paired with all the letters I rap
You see my words are my body, my body lays in the paper
this rapping gave me a savior, a god that states my behavior
through verse and rhythms and meter, I curse the system, I beat her
worse the victim is neither, a person, spitting, or preachers
it's what I am, It's my problem, I cry in hands just to solve em
Try to stand but I'm lost in, my doubt, suspicion, it's awesome
You try achieving a goal, when both your feet are there, shattered
Then come and speak to me, all my hope defeated and scattered
my tongue is evenly, depressed by all the biting I'm doing
no one is seemingly, impressed by all the writing I'm spewing
What's the point of existence, if you're existing in nothing?
at the point of resistance, but no resistance is coming.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Emotion

Postby DƎRDYPK » Jun 11th, '10, 15:50

Whoa
that was quite the quick read homie :wave:
but damn.....I was feeling that :worship:
really love your emotional pieces :y:
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Re: Emotion

Postby macdaddy019967 » Jun 17th, '10, 18:57

my favorite part
You see my words are my body, my body lays in the paper
this rapping gave me a savior, a god that states my behavior
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#JMG #SacJB #ToxicBuffy #Trinell #Meadows_Killas
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Re: Emotion

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 17th, '10, 21:20

macdaddy019967 wrote:my favorite part
You see my words are my body, my body lays in the paper
this rapping gave me a savior, a god that states my behavior

:worship:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Emotion

Postby Robot » Jun 17th, '10, 22:03

I liked it. Sounded deep. :b:
I never asked, cared, gave a fuck, or wanted opinions.
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Re: Emotion

Postby ShaBruv » Jun 18th, '10, 13:50

fucking insane multis Mc AN
I know you want to retaliate but you won't dare,
Cause you fuckin with some ****** like this who just don't care.

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