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Preemptive strike

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Preemptive strike

Postby mcZu » Jun 19th, '10, 23:35

Try using your eye sockets, it’s ‘c’est la vie’ life bruh
Why vomit? If my pen game sicker than HIV saliva
The game? I run it, it’s not ironic see, the shine a-
Killer, you pussies couldn’t come good if you thumb played a vagina
Please, don’t play dumb and drop the gun play, you vagina’s
You’re not putting iron to my face ‘cause I’m not MF Doom
Bunch of fake emcees, I’m ‘bout to end them soon
And as soon as you try to stop this kid like a coat hanger to a womb
The cold anger from a tomb will just fill up this room
‘cause my style is smooth and suave yet rough
No bluff, when I cough it aint swine tendencies
‘cause I don’t eat pork, you see, then they cease
To exist in the rap scene when I sent the least
Dope rhymes I voice the life line stalking a route this big
I beat haters more often than Royce Da 5’9’’ talking about his dick
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
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Re: Preemptive strike

Postby Spyder » Jun 20th, '10, 05:15

i used something similar to that MFDoom line :shifty:

pretty nice for a quick drop bro
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Re: Preemptive strike

Postby classthe_king » Jun 20th, '10, 16:55

Zu, you're the most consistant nukka on this board
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Preemptive strike

Postby mcZu » Jun 21st, '10, 22:02

Thanks guys, appreciate it.
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Re: Preemptive strike

Postby MoltenMetalMan » Jun 26th, '10, 08:52

Le Tuneisen has used that MF Doom line before :y:
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