Joining CW section today

[wrestler1256]

think im gonna start writing more and join the cw section. ive written one verse and put it here before but i wanna start posting more consistantly. you guys seem to have a good little community here and ill do my best to start leaving feedback and post anything i write.

well heres my second drop


Im so nervous my eyes twitchin
cant surcome to the ideas im pitchin
Cant place the ball in the mitt and
Im so unproductive from gettin litten
So im sittin here again listenin to voices in my head
Put me down like a dog but like the owner im upset
Its my fault this had to happen
My constan lack of ration
Seperates me from the outside world like i unpacked my passion
And put it all away like it was standing in my way
From doin what i wanted like a damn across a lake
I cant get past it but my only barrier is my cocscience
Im inferior to this nonsenes, the protocal is always constant
Like a script for actors on set, i need to stop acting
Like rappers sayin that theyre packin, or talkin bout the hoes they tappin
Whats happenin, i cant even keep my head on strait
Im fishin to find the answers but im bitless with no bait
Time to wait is runnin down before ill be too late
I need to put myself out there so i can persue fate

[Fa-Q]

CW has actually gone down hill since a lot of people left...Co and others...no one comments any more...sucks

[wrestler1256]

shit really?
fuck it i dont care
im still gonna start writing more cause its still somethin i wanna do
ill still try to leave as much feedback as possible too. it seems kinda hard though like i dont know what to say other than "thats really good!'' like i just read your peice "over and over", the whole damn thing and i didnt even know what to say lol.

[Just Silver]

Pretty good for a first attempt

Yeah i think CW went downhill because Recovery came out

work on your flow a bit and you'll get a lot better