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Quick One//My Explanation

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Quick One//My Explanation

Postby Solace » Jun 15th, '10, 00:06

When I said I cared I had meant every sentence true,
The world to me, don't want to know what I meant to you,
On the edge, dead, fed up, you were pullin' me through,
Didn't let myself believe you were too good to be true,
You told me how you felt love...Quite for another dude,
I just looked away...I'm too proud to cry infront of you,
It's nothing true if I look you in the eyes and say I'm over it,
Maybe you could try to ask me when I'm sorta sober bitch,
You never even realized that I would've died, it's true,
And now I've wasted time, just know that I've cried for you,
Not to mention I'd rhyme for you, line after line I'd do,
Do you even know how much my minds been through?
I'm awestruck, and through all of this I've lost trust,
I'll try to move on and forget the plenty pain you brought us,
I see you...I hate you, I love you, pretend to hate your sight,
Just wanna say bye as I enter into this gracious light.

So let me explain how much I fucking love you,
How much I fucking hate you, oh what can one do,
I don't even think I'll be able to make it tonight,
Waiting for you to spit on my face as I die.

EDIT: Spelling error in title drove me crazy.
Last edited by Solace on Jun 29th, '10, 03:30, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Quick One//Explaination

Postby gutawafang » Jun 15th, '10, 02:41

Very angry? :o
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Re: Quick One//Explaination

Postby Solace » Jun 20th, '10, 02:12

Very trying to get out of writers block.
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Re: Quick One//Explaination

Postby Emadyville » Jun 20th, '10, 03:18

Solace wrote:Very trying to get out of writers block.


don't force shit, just let shit come to you when it does, but this is decent homie
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


I love you Daren
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Re: Quick One//Explaination

Postby classthe_king » Jun 20th, '10, 05:01

Dope verse homie, I don't know how much drinkin you do though :unsure:
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Quick One//Explaination

Postby Solace » Jun 29th, '10, 03:30

Emadyville wrote:
Solace wrote:Very trying to get out of writers block.


don't force shit, just let shit come to you when it does, but this is decent homie

Thanks Emady!

classthe_king wrote:Dope verse homie, I don't know how much drinkin you do though :unsure:

Thanks man and you knew what I meant lol.
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