Im Back (key-style)

[bullet_boy46]

i own you all like DARTH VADER, im ya damn FATHER
dont even BOTHER MAN, im the only real STROTHER
"i could beat you!!" ((pause))
bitch, thats like putting me against a blind man in a game of clue
i could impress, like kim kardashian in a short dress, see-thru too
i sure love the game INCEST, girl i really know that YOU CAN DO!
im one of the few who can actually rap when he puts mind to it
its like he was designed to do it, this is how his brain keeps moving
but it freezes like brain freeze, writers block, everything just stops, no soothing
trust me, i've been tempted to bite lyrics again but im sober,
red rover, red rover, bitch im not going over

[Solace]

Good thing you're not copying Eminem at all or anything.

[bullet_boy46]

Good thing you're not copying Eminem at all or anything.

i stopped...

[Solace]

Seems tooooo Eminem influenced. Eminem always saying "I'm back". Oh there you go with Star Wars, pop culture references. Oh and whats that? A line about Kim Kardashian?

Hit a blind man with a coloring book and told him color inside the lines

bitch, thats like putting me against a blind man in a game of clue

Tbh it's bad overall, but it's you so it's not bad. You get it? For your level its okay for a key. Generally speaking, no. Keep at it and work on upping the flow and multies.

[bullet_boy46]

cant lie, only line i really thought about was the blind man..never thought about the im back, kim k., or star wars...im still trying to get better so..yea...

thanks

[bullet_boy46]

im more of a producer then a rapper..i got some good beats