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Kick Rocs

Postby Strictt Ame » Jul 3rd, '10, 06:58

Nameplay kids..take notes

Listen-stop..nobody wants to read anything this bitch-can-drop
Cuz each verse you spit is like 'pond stones'..we're skippin-Roc's!!
And you know your fake-for-dissin-me, time to make-your-misery
When I hit the ground, 'Roc gets shook' like every earthquake-in-history!!
Who the hell is Roc? another Jay-Z groupie? This fuckin coward-blows
Send shots at me..watch this 'J get rejected' with a Dwight Howard-flow!!
Gotcha fallin back, stay-with-me, or get maimed-quickly
And its way too obvious ya flows like 'popcorn'..cuz J-Iffy (Jiffy)!!
Faggot stay-still before you end up leavin here with a frayed-grill
So you gotta be drunk on “Jack, going up a hill” to think J-Ill!!
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Re: Kick Rocs

Postby J Roc » Jul 3rd, '10, 07:08

Not Bad Not Bad, Hot Some Parts .... a tip tho ; J-illa, J-iffy .. aint wordplay. they gotta sound alike. besides that , Sick shit

I was hoping you'd reply though .... i'll show u why when i wake up tomorow haha ... Finna be the hottest Punchline Beef TR ever Saw
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Re: Kick Rocs

Postby Strictt Ame » Jul 3rd, '10, 18:31

Never said WORDplay did I? I said nameplay..and please show me, I could use a good warmup..this was quick shit, Im not back on my game yet.. :shifty:
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Re: Kick Rocs

Postby J Roc » Jul 3rd, '10, 18:45

Yuh it's still a play on words even if one of the words is apart of my name lol

Keeep ur eyes peeled for it.
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