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Fruity Pebbles (J Roc Diss)

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Fruity Pebbles (J Roc Diss)

Postby Strictt Ame » Jul 4th, '10, 17:47

Rip me in a Jiffy? The wise move would be stop-for-ya-jammed
Choppin-this-man, droppin him in ocean turn Roc-into-sand
Glocks-gonna-blam? Whack gunplay is just awful-and-dumb
You know you wouldn’t ‘pop a toaster’ even if ya waffles-were-done
You fuckin-my-ex? Then Im doubled over clutchin-my-chest..its folk-lore
Cuz I would laugh my ass off once you found out shes a coke-whore
Im ill-and-its-so-worse, sick with nouns and a thiller-with-more-verbs
Step to Ame, try-the-site and Ill let my Iron-Mic kill-ya-in-Four-Wordds
Leave ya bitter-with-more-burns..spit fire when I perform-Im-liver
Seek shelter-kid Ill melt-ya-quick..watch Roc transform-into-lava
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Re: Fruity Pebbles (J Roc Diss)

Postby J Roc » Jul 4th, '10, 19:28

Lmao i just got put in my place

Whut i tell you?? ... 'This'll be the hottest beef thats beeen on TR' Or Samthing


i'll reply later ma son .... Just smoked a couple joints and a bong hit so i'm passing on writing for a bit lol.

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