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Caught In The Web

Postby Strictt Ame » Jul 2nd, '10, 22:16

Listen..

I see I got you prepared, spittin lies callin it Truth or Dare
Well testin the God is only gonna lead to the wrath Judas bared
One wink N ya die, otherwise your finished in the blink of an eye
You are what you eat..guess thats why Spyder thinks thats he fly
Yeh I lost to Chambers, my verse wasnt in my top few bouts
But look up our battle, Im pretty sure I fuckin knocked you out
I left, this true..got divorced and had to go through a shit fued
But speakin my name months after I bounced..that was a BITCH MOVE
I dont give a damn is the verse was old, shouldve bit your tongue
Cuz your punchlines sucked..mine strike n split your lungs
Truthfully speaking this is my first diss in 4 months, still better than Spy
And I hope your lactose intolerant..cuz I can give you some cheddar to die!!


LOL..cmon man, you know Im not gonna let you slide sending some shots at me..
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Re: Caught In The Web

Postby classthe_king » Jul 3rd, '10, 00:31

Ƨteven© wrote::unsure:

Good drop i guess. some parts were weak.

Spyder is ALOT better now than what he might of used to be, if he has time to battle you, i think you will lose.


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Noooooooooooooooooo way. I love spyder but strictt ame is a fucking monster
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Caught In The Web

Postby J Roc » Jul 3rd, '10, 00:46

Stricct Ill, We Get It haha ..... Spyder juss left though ....
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Re: Caught In The Web

Postby Just Silver » Jul 3rd, '10, 00:47

whereve you been
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Re: Caught In The Web

Postby Solace » Jul 3rd, '10, 00:52

That was doppeee :y:
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Re: Caught In The Web

Postby Solace » Jul 3rd, '10, 00:57

I'm going to feed everyone elses 'cept yours now Steven just to tick you off. :coffee:
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Re: Caught In The Web

Postby Spyder » Jul 4th, '10, 18:38

thanks for the love Steven

and yea i member those line now that im looking at this piece :laughing:

but yea im leaving after the results of ms vs anon so i cant beef

sorry
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Re: Caught In The Web

Postby Strictt Ame » Jul 4th, '10, 19:21

No prob man..just wanted to let you know I saw your piece from a little while back..lol
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Re: Caught In The Web

Postby Spyder » Jul 4th, '10, 19:22

did ya like it :flutter:
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Re: Caught In The Web

Postby Strictt Ame » Jul 4th, '10, 19:23

Sparked a response didnt it? :D
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Re: Caught In The Web

Postby Spyder » Jul 4th, '10, 19:39

hell yeah son :wub:
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