Wishful Thinking

[gutawafang]

Why can't I move my lips to say the three words you might need?
Now I show you, I remove my script, yes it hurts, but you might keep
This in you, in your heart, eternally, sincerely
Let this lyrics on this paper say them out and oh so clearly
I love you, it's all I want to say but certain days I took it back
Beause you had that guy with baggy pants, I had no chance, he's things I lack
Except a damn contract, you and him ain't married, ok, I contradict
Damn no, I give no damn that you've ever been on his dick
I know I was rejected, so naturally I felt dejected
Everytime you out of sight or he's in sight, I'd be affected
Yes I know he's on your mind but you know you're on mine
This is pain, agony and misery, it's all combined
I know you can't accept this truest love without a trace of deceit
I can't handle this no more, it's too much, I can't face this besiege
I'm so in love it hurts but I'll still sing this fucking presto
Oh, would you kiss my lips when you breakup with that fucking asshole?

I love you more than I hate that guy you with
I love myself more than I love you, by the way
I love you more than any moment you love me back
Get it? I love you, and you love me, forever

Fuck realism, this system is what you call narcissism
But fuck that too because I believe this is what you call idealism
That's why every proposal I present to you, they so real you think it's true intent
Just like how I always bragged and lied to my fucking stupid friends
I apologize for the instigations, but then why not you kill me?
My dear, I'd rather die than hide right beside you, please reveal me
Love me back with all your heart, I've given you every frag of mine
But then again, I know you got that motherfucking fag in mind
So what do I do? Do I just wait like I got so much of what the clock tells?
Time and love, oh how I wish they're what God sells
My love, won't you take this moment to breathe the right air?
We do have feelings that I really think we might share
Yes, fuck that guy you're with, dump that fucking piece of trash
Tell him, out of respect I wanna say, "fuck off or kiss my ass"

I love you more than I hate that guy you with
I love myself more than I love you, by the way
I love you more than any moment you love me back
Get it? I love you, and you love me, forever

[gutawafang]

[Solace]

This was better than the one I just left feed on for you. I didnt get the flow or rhymes or anything of the chorus so I assume it was sung. But written it was meh. Dislike the chorus. Verses are great. You always have a great diction in your pieces. Favourite parts of the verses:

Verse 1, this entire part was beast. I loved the flow and I could get that relatable emotion from it.

I know I was rejected, so naturally I felt dejected
Everytime you out of sight or he's in sight, I'd be affected
Yes I know he's on your mind but you know you're on mine
This is pain, agony and misery, it's all combined
I know you can't accept this truest love without a trace of deceit
I can't handle this no more, it's too much, I can't face this besiege

Verse 2, same rawness as the above part quoted from the first verse.

That's why every proposal I present to you, they so real you think it's true intent
Just like how I always bragged and lied to my fucking stupid friends
I apologize for the instigations, but then why not you kill me?
My dear, I'd rather die than hide right beside you, please reveal me
Love me back with all your heart, I've given you every frag of mine
But then again, I know you got that motherfucking fag in mind
So what do I do? Do I just wait like I got so much of what the clock tells?
Time and love, oh how I wish they're what God sells

[gutawafang]

^ Thank you very much for the feedback my man.