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Throwaway Piece

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Throwaway Piece

Postby Just Silver » Jul 9th, '10, 04:08

First draft of a first verse

Supposed to be a Derdy collab eventually


SInce you have not been applying the pressure
Im supplying for mecca in this sector
Get high and hike against it im gettin hypertension
I flick my lighter lit and,Im the sickest flyest fig-mant
Pigs can fly? im like shit man, this bud is done in instant
Time combined just how i am blind, why everythings a trick plan
Say action spray click-clack away, ready for play action neigh..
Im Madd-en happy like "there he goes boom"
I think it goes through,these head are thick i told you
I mold dudes, like sold food i make them my old "dues"
Hell no he didn't Hell yes he did
Hell no flipped two little letters and spun "ON" to this shit
So bruised little feathers of my cruel true endeavors
Can fly fly into a mist, get high just for a bit
They fly wont heaven forbid?
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