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A "Dope" FreeVerse

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A "Dope" FreeVerse

Postby TheHundred$ » Jul 15th, '10, 22:42

Blazing endo in the middle of a zen garden, I cast a spell to surround myself with a shell and then harden, All this time my ego i've been guarding,Energy that i'm discarding, astounding you like I Beg your pardon. My flow is like a river, I sever then I deliver, when I lose is never ever, I'll shake you and give you shivers, then break you into slivers, got arrows inside my quiver, and they narrow and sharp as scissors, Get ready for the blow, when I throw money around I say get ready for the snow, Tom Petty bitch i'm a heart breaker if you didn't know, I'm cruel and oh so cold, but my swag is like liquid gold , i'm priceless so I am never sold, you'll think twice if the macs been pulled, i'll stack bread if it won't fold, contact with the ganja rolled, has got me to want ya soul, these drugs will cause you to haunch you should...ers.. brr is it cold outside? I swear I see snow all up on my ride, liquid cyanide as i coincide to describe my vibe, then I spit a line.. fuck that I fucking spit some crack it will numb your spine, that with the sound combined the compound rhyme, leave a sour ass taste like limes, and you can't fuck with this homie so don't waste your time, cause I don't get better with age like fine wine, I get madder with rage when i can't find the words that are on my mind, reset rewind, recollect remind, so I never forget that these moments were mine, like a picture I depict your past, but I do it in rhyme so these people can laugh at your ass, I left you in last when i passed your ass, so pass the grass, and i'll smoke up till i slump over like mustard gas, achieve, surpass along the way try to show some class, cause some people be looking through the glass to put you on blast worse then a flag at half mast, faster than a pastur say BLAS - phomy you better ask for me.

Just went on a roll as I was typing, no structure cause it's meant to be a constant flow throughout the whole thing.
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I used to be able to spit
Now I can't even split my lips
to rip this spliff that I lit
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Re: A "Dope" FreeVerse

Postby BILI » Jul 26th, '10, 17:30

Niceee,it does flow like river :y: .Also alot of nice rhymes.

liquid cyanide as i coincide to describe my vibe, then I spit a line.. fuck that I fucking spit some crack it will numb your spine, that with the sound combined the compound rhyme

my fav part
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Re: A "Dope" FreeVerse

Postby ThomasJ » Jul 26th, '10, 23:14

I like this a lot man,keep it up. :y:
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Forced entry, the more wenchy, the more stingy I become
Been doing this for more than a quarter century, I'm just numb...
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