He Is A Demon

[R.A.G.E In Darkness]

See the Demon? Pardon-Him, All-of-Him, Calling-Sin
Balling-In Vaults-Within Artisan Mentality, And he's Lost-Within
Parts-Of-Him, He got a Heart-Of-Tin and he is Offering
All-of-Him, shaking like Parkinsons, Walking-In A Partisan
Of Spiritual Cognisance, Balls-His-Fists, and Calls-It-Quits
Going to the Largest-Ditch, Carcass-Drifts and Falls-In-Pit
Bleeding-Dieseases, Keeping-His-Reasons of Teasing-The-Demons
Secret from Even his Closest relatives, He CEASES BREATHING.
Everything he's ever Seeing wakes up Legions-Sleeping
Heartless Beatings being palpitated, Seeping-Even...

[R.A.G.E In Darkness]

A bunch of senseless multies do not make a piece worth reading. Good job knowing how to rhyme multi syllables, now try to make it make sense and fit onto an instrumental so it flows smoothly and is phonetically pleasing to the ear.

I was bored playing around.. go to J-Roc's diss and see when I'm serious dissing.

[tjb]

there were multiessss but the only point of your rhymes were to rhyme. like sinide said ^

[R.A.G.E In Darkness]

A bunch of senseless multies do not make a piece worth reading. Good job knowing how to rhyme multi syllables, now try to make it make sense and fit onto an instrumental so it flows smoothly and is phonetically pleasing to the ear.

I was bored playing around.. go to J-Roc's diss and see when I'm serious dissing.

[Yah-hah]

Idk man I loved it. I know people like full songs and all but theres nothing wrong with with expressing just plain and simple multie skill. Not sayin they are plain and simple they're great. But I do that alot just rhyme to rhyme sometimes and I thought this was dope

[BILI]

It was dope man,not your best work but still nice.