One World

[ThomasJ]

All we get is one world,one home,ain't no reparations
If we don't do something now,prepare for devastation
Centuries later,people racial segregating
Stuck in the past,without a clue what's going on
All this hate and misery,the shit's slowly getting me
Murderers on the loose,innocent people in imprisonment
Instead of offering peace,countries becoming militant
World War 3 in the making,fucking Apocalypse
Violence in the streets,cops don't give a fuck
10 year old boy a dealer,his older sis' a slut
Rich becoming richer,and would never give a buck
To the homeless people,and even worse,it's a rut
Same old,same old,who to blame yo
Read the papers,everything looks so bland yo
'Cause people are used to shit like that
But not me,fuck you,gimme my life back
Til I die,I'ma fight for change in the system
Change in our habits,the way that we livin'
Pay for what you're given,instead of stealing shit
Use your smartness,instead of concealing it
Don't disrespect,just 'cause people are different
We're all just human,men and women
And we CAN all get along,stop with the masking
Just acknowledge and accept,that's all I'm asking

[Yah-hah]

I liked it a good solid peice. Alot of emotion and a good script. I enjoyed it, I mean solid multies, great structure no bad thing to say about it

[ThomasJ]

I liked it a good solid peice. Alot of emotion and a good script. I enjoyed it, I mean solid multies, great structure no bad thing to say about it

Thanks a lot man
It means a lot coming from a guy like you

[Robbie G]

That was nice man. Technically it was decent and I liked how you said something in it instead of the normal battle rapping/i'm the shit that most drops are.

[gutawafang]

I don't like "slut" in a song... xD

The flow was quite ok to me. Some parts a little hard to flow. required to read twice.

Multis were pretty good man. keep posting my man.

[BILI]

I really like the concept and everything,it was nice peace Tj,skill-waise it was ok too,nice rhyming and flow was on point for me

[ThomasJ]

Thanks a lot BILI.

[ThomasJ]

Thanks Francesco.

[Fa-Q]

god piece, good vocab..I want you to try something though....when you write serious shit like this, its best to eithervividly describe each event (no matter how many lines it may take) and/or compare violent things like this to inocent things....idk try it out