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The Point of No Return

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The Point of No Return

Postby Solace » Aug 2nd, '10, 06:22

For fucks sakes, from Monday to Sunday, I've been upstaged,
I'm having too many tracks backed with just none played,
And I'll do whatever it takes, guns, blades, I'll win one day,
I just sit, wish and reminisce that the kiss of Miss Sun stays,
A mass of gore embarks because I'm back to throwing darts,
Where I have to roam, this art is madness, savage cold and dark,
From the power of society they split the back and bone apart,
This world is laughing at these sad and tragic broken hearts,
Pain just breaks us down, forced to be bringing the hatred,
Without being civil how do we live the course of civilization,
My mind happens to crash, smash, and I turn my weakest,
And all I can do is stare, glare, as this world burns to pieces,
None of this we deserve the least bit, we're basked in doom,
Poorly in this story it seems every door leads to a padded room,
From ravaged morning to a savage noon, a rookie fumbles,
The game is lost, we'll play it off, that's how the cookie crumbles.
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Re: The Point of No Return

Postby gutawafang » Aug 2nd, '10, 06:23

holy fuck.

flow is dope man.

no difficulty rapping it out. gotta love it. :worship:
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Re: The Point of No Return

Postby Solace » Aug 2nd, '10, 06:28

Epic props on fast feed Fishy. :worship:
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Re: The Point of No Return

Postby Robbie G » Aug 3rd, '10, 03:18

Nice drop

From the power of society they split the back and bone apart,
This world is laughing at these sad and tragic broken hearts,


These were my favorite lines. I love how the bone apart/broken heart rhyme sounds.

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Re: The Point of No Return

Postby Solace » Aug 3rd, '10, 05:47

Thanks dude! :b:
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