Forgive Me FreeVerse

[ThomasJ]

They say a man is determined by his actions
And we all gotta learn from our past sins
Been a believer for as long as I recall
Take your hand whenever I slip and fall
Pray on a daily basis,and go to church
Talk to you whenever my soul would hurt
So absurd that your God would stop caring
I wish all these demons inside me stopped staring
I didn't do anything wrong,did I deserve it?
I'm not a saint and my life is far from perfect
Your attention? I guess I'm not worth it
Never found prosperity so I stopped searching
And here I am now,writing this letter
I know it's not gonna make me feel better
God,if you're listenin',let me know
That you're here,don't let me go

[Robbie G]

Not much to say but it was a nice drop.

My favorite lines:

They say a man is determined by his actions
And we all gotta learn from our past sins

[ThomasJ]

Not much to say but it was a nice drop.

My favorite lines:

They say a man is determined by his actions
And we all gotta learn from our past sins

Thanks Robbie.

[Drama Setter]

Not bad bro , Keep droppin

[ThomasJ]

Not bad bro , Keep droppin

Thanks Drama.

[Yah-hah]

Was good man your pretty under the radar. I think if you do more songs or turn your free verses into bigger and better projects I think people would recognize you above the level your at now. Just my 2 cents though. Think everything was good, short lines helped he flow multis were good

[ThomasJ]

Was good man your pretty under the radar. I think if you do more songs or turn your free verses into bigger and better projects I think people would recognize you above the level your at now. Just my 2 cents though. Think everything was good, short lines helped he flow multis were good

Let me rephrase that...