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CJ - I'm a G (2 Verses & Hook)

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CJ - I'm a G (2 Verses & Hook)

Postby ChronicJon » Aug 3rd, '10, 09:16

Don't bitch about the subject matter because everything I've said I felt like was what I feel. So please no "You're not tough", "Stop acting hard, etc :y:

I wrote it to this beat. http://www.shadowville.com/813/genres/gangsta-beats/armed-to-the-teeth

[Verse 1]
All instigators please stay cool, watch what you say fool,
If you are to look for fights, I'll just pull out a gray tool,
I'm not playing when I'm saying I'll start savagely slaying,
A family laying, slaughtered, do ya get the gravity mayne?
God knows how many sins I'll comit when I receive a gun,
Believe it son, grieve it son, relax just breathe and run,
'Fore I get your life, leave it done, and I'm not boasting,
I'll kill your bros and, hoes and, fuck, I'll just get to roasting,
Believe me homey I ain't fronting with this black bandana,
Call out a loved one and it ain't rap man, nada,
Maybe I'm too young for this, but I really don't give a fuck,
And I may not be big or buff, but a fuck I can't give enough,

[Hook]
Y'all don't,
Know how I get,
When y'all start,
To inspect...
Meeeeeeeeeeeeeee,
Push me,
And I will blow,
But, just know,
That I'ma...
Geeeeeeeeeeeeeee,

[Verse 2]
Any motherfucker who's treated me like shit is gonna regret it,
I'm gonna scream my fucking brains out 'til I have a headache,
My rage please don't set it, I'ma get my dignity and bet it,
Because I'm one-hundred percent sure when you see you'll wet it,
Understand this, when I say I'll kill you I don't mean lyrically,
I fucking mean literally, stomp you 'til I see your spirit flee,
If you think this track is an exaggeration you're dead wrong,
So quote everything I've said on, this rugged, wrecked song,
Quote MC Ren, I'm a crazy motherfucker, you know this,
I'll teach you how to eat my whole fist, come take notice,
That my image is to be lived, a fuck not to be gived,
And my fucking dick is to be sucked, not to be licked,

[Hook]
Y'all don't,
Know how I get,
When y'all start,
To inspect...
Meeeeeeeeeeeeeee,
Push me,
And I will blow,
But, just know,
That I'ma...
Geeeeeeeeeeeeeee,
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Re: CJ - I'm a G (2 Verses & Hook)

Postby ChronicJon » Aug 3rd, '10, 22:39

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Re: CJ - I'm a G (2 Verses & Hook)

Postby ThomasJ » Aug 3rd, '10, 22:41

You're not tough so stop acting hard.

JK I liked this man,what else to say,except maybe for,I don't like the hook. :y:
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Forced entry, the more wenchy, the more stingy I become
Been doing this for more than a quarter century, I'm just numb...
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Re: CJ - I'm a G (2 Verses & Hook)

Postby Yah-hah » Aug 3rd, '10, 22:46

Yeah i didnt really like the chorus but everything else was good man really enjoyed it
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: CJ - I'm a G (2 Verses & Hook)

Postby ChronicJon » Aug 3rd, '10, 22:59

Thanks Yah-hah and TJ :y:

I guess I'll change the chorus when I drop the whole song :smoking:
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Postby ChronicJon » Aug 4th, '10, 02:43

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