Look To The Skies (Opposite Ends Of The Spectrum)

[Peace_Maker]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=81n6qpdNgi8

The tears of God keep on raining down, every day he drowns
He's trying to wade it out because he's gotta make it now
He's made a vowel, in his soul, not to cower or slow
Fall down, he won't fold, he will amount to his goals
And his dreams and wishes, concoctin' schemes to get em
He's strong but needs uplifting to conquer the beast within' him
At night he sees a vision, he's climbing a frosty peak
The tears freeze to snow flakes soon as they hit his cheeks
He doesn't speak, he clasps his hands as he kneels
And looks to the sky, and he awakes in a chill

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nnz2gNt5fSY

Hope, fuck that, I'm just a bum on the streets
No shirt, no shoes, gum stuck to my feet
I just creep...I'm the creep in the street
Pile up some pizza boxes and I sleep in the heap
Who needs heat...daily news on my chest
Newspapers to the world, fuck covers and beds
Park bench...I just set on my ass
No regrets for all those spitballs in class
I didn't pass...but hell I didn't try
Now I cart around these cans and look up at the sky

[Yah-hah]

I like the concept of this one its great idea I like the simpleness of it yet its still deep. Definitly a dope overall peice

[Peace_Maker]

I like the concept of this one its great idea I like the simpleness of it yet its still deep. Definitly a dope overall peice

It was sloppily done here, like a test run, the other one is flipped way better. "Almighty Dolla"